| "Burn it Black" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Miranda On: March 13, 2003 15:46 CST
Comment/Review:
kool..... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S AWESOME!!!!!!!!` |
Reviewed By: Mikan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful! Exquisite! Your writing style is beautiful and you portray Dilly-Sama’s character very well. I love Artemis’ defiant personality! I hope we get to see more of her strengths and weaknesses as an assassin as she protects herself. After all living in a floating fortress is dangerous. You might trip over an angry general and get slapped in the face. *Lol* I just hope it’s not Dilly-sama! |
Reviewed By: PhoenixG On: May 19, 2002 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok... I'm gonna review again... But just so you know, your gonna have to UPDATE if you want to get another review from me ^.^ Great fic! CANT WAIT to see the next chapter... lets just make sure it gets posted SOON!!!! Ok?? ok. Good. latr days my friend!
Phoenix |
Reviewed By: PhoenixG [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2002 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! It's posted on ff.net too right... I beleive thats where I first saw it... yup... I'm positive. Seeing I didn't leave a review there I thought I review here! ^^ Great fic! Sounds interesting! Cant wait to see the next chapter! So you better post soon!!! SOON!!! Not two months from now! SOON, with a capital S. O. O. N! ^^ lol. J/k take your time. Do a good job, I'd rather a well written fic, than something just slaped together and posted in a rush... I'm starting to rambel... Like I said! Great fic! Bu-Bye!!!
Phoenix... (My rantings will live on forever in my many messed up fic's or at least the characters... ^.^ And oh yea... dont bother checking them out on mediaminer. there all rough copies... Kinda. And I stopped posting them here. So there kinda... um... incomplete. Now... I'll shut up... yup... I'm sutting up now! in three... two... one...) |
Reviewed By: Mystical_Angel On: July 12, 2003 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though ur the thirdd one. I really enjoyed ur story very creative. I hope u write more. I'm a big fan of Esca and sometimes SM. very creative writing and the style of writing are impressive. I hope u write more. Ur newly fan |
