| "The Truth Hurts...in a good sorta way." Reviews/Comments [ 204 ] |
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 01:27 PST
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Not exactly perfect huh? I thought it was. It was way more perfect than any of my first times. heh. Really; outstanding lemon and unusually good timing for Jaken. Poor Sessh...I liked that he lost his concentration. Unusual for him.This should be an interesting conversation. I'm looking forward to reading it.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 23:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol Alright that right *S* hah ha Jaken *Sniker sniker *
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Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 20:43 PST
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YAY! i liked it! YAY!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 20:23 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter! Yay Lemon! One of the best I've ever read. I can't wait to read what happens next, Please Update SOON!
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Reviewed By: spicey while wet On: November 30, 2006 19:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that waz hot. I can't wait to read what happens next
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 19:01 PST
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Another great chapter! I truly hope you update soon. I can't wait to find out Kagome's reaction to all the details of Inu mating. Not to mention how Inuyasha will respond to his brother mating with Kagome. Until next time, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: amhor56 On: November 30, 2006 17:35 PST
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Yes! Finally! That was a good lemon to. Kinda of weird though that Kagome dominated and was frisky. But it's all good! HAHAHA! Well damn, hope Sesshoumaru talks to her about the mating thing. I'm not so sure Kagome will be happy to having that kept from her. Thank you for the amazing lemon and update soon.
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Title: ch 19
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 16:41 PST
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Wow... Kagome definitely seems to have different expectations from this relationship. Does she really think Sesshoumaru is going to return her to Inuyasha?? Is she really OK with that idea? Does this mean, even though Sesshoumaru hasn't marked her officially, that she is still stuck with him until she dies? How is she going to take That news? Will she escape through the well? Great chapter, looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: RhiannonoftheMoon (nli) On: November 30, 2006 16:17 PST
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Splendid lemon and such a fun deviation from the norm. Even their first time was hilarious! Poor Sesshou, he definately has some explaining to do. Though I certainly wouldn't mind being tied to a hot demon lord for the rest of our lives, Kagome might take umbridge - at least at not being told first - for a little while. Probably not as much as Inuyasha will! ^_^; And Jaken's little amphibious heart must be crushed. It just wasn't meant to be.
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Reviewed By: Cassial_Darkfox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 15:40 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehe!! YAY! That was awesome and hilarious and perfect! I can't wait to see what happens when he explains things to her.. great job!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 15:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo hoo! Can't believe a lemon can be so great and funny at the same time! Now I know. Still loving the way their thoughts play out -- this whole story has just been a masterpiece so far. Can't believe he didn't mark her after he didn't tell her. Looking forward to the repercussions, explanations, and everything!! Bravo!!
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 18:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! ur disappointing me.... U haven't updated in like 2 days... WAH! I must read more!! I want u to finish writin the ext ch. and posted ASAP!!!! I wanna read it, cuz I'm sick in the mind like that.... LOL.... WELL UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 20:16 PST
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more...more...must...have...more...
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Reviewed By: sweetness92490 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 20:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 16:57 PST
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omg u have got to be the fastest typer/updater EVER and I LOVE IT!! I love ur story and how quick u update!! So don't disappoint me and update VERY SOON!!
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