| "The Truth Hurts...in a good sorta way." Reviews/Comments [ 204 ] |
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 16:54 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! I loved it! Please post the next chapter soon!! I can't wait to read more! They finally gave in and neither can lie about they're attraction anymore.
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Reviewed By: amhor56 On: November 27, 2006 16:52 PST
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Damn you! UGH!!! Cliffy! Wow ok now you must update as soon as humanly possible. God you have to! Ok well UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: RhiannonoftheMoon (lni) On: November 27, 2006 15:36 PST
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So, so good! It makes my heart all fluttery and happy! Boy, did I need that, too. Can't wait for your next update!
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Title: ch 18
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 15:19 PST
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... well. 0_0 ... neat chapter title. ^_^; and about this: "With an overly girly grunt..." I know what you are talking about and have always been kind of disappointed in my girly grunts when moving furnature. oh well. Looking for the next chapter!
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Title: KIMBA COOL
Reviewed By: terest [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 15:08 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i say you should make a book because this would make one darn of a book. i know i would buy it. i really really like the new chapter. i cant wait till you update again.
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 14:47 PST
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Oh Kami... this is going to get good. I loved that she flipped out on him... I would have too, because seriously who has the right to tell someone who they should and shouldn't love. I will stay off that topic now I don't want to get all riled up. This was a great chapter, and I can't wait for the next one. I am sure it will be just as good if not better than the previous ones, and I will try my hardest to be patient and wait for it. I loved how even when he told her to stop moving she wouldn't... I have to say I would have been the same way and I would have frozen if Sess-chan had confronted me the way he did her. You are a great writer and I will be waiting for the next chapter of this story. Until next time, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 13:57 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved every word! I will never watch another cooking show in the same way again. I, too, was disappointed that he didn't have a spatula when he walked in the bedroom. And where can I buy a demon bed like that one? Shame on her -- of course she should face up to her responsibility if she took his virginity. I think that had to be the MOST embarrassing question the Taiyoukai had EVER been asked. Oh, if only Inuyasha could have heard it! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you will include a scene wrapping things up with Inu at the end. Can't wait for an explanation to him of what all happened. This has been a never-ending joyride! Looking forward to the rest of this story and then your NEXT one!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 13:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow hmmmmm....*S*
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Title: weee!
Reviewed By: kagomemiko123 On: November 26, 2006 19:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! now sesshomaru just did that! without rin noticing! you sooooo have to UPDATE!
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Title: 16-17
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 13:50 PST
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wow, kagome does some pretty um, ... interesting things when she is angry. the way you ended chapter 16 was inspired. Does kagome actually think Sesshoumaru will be content with "being even"?? Heh, I look forward to more ^_^
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 10:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One hand job at a time....too cute. Keep writing doing a wonderful job
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 08:03 PST
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Another great chapter. I can't wait for the next one! I love how Sess-chan came up with the idea of cornering her when she couldn't get away and she wouldn't cause a scene because of Rin. Well I hope you update soon. Until next time ja ne!
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Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 02:50 PST
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omg I can't wait for the next chapter!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 00:54 PST
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hee hee!
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 00:12 PST
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Oh Gawd. "Look! Rin!" as a human shield. You've obviously done this before. Me too; not a real quick thinker. It is effective though. Very picturesque (sp?) chapter, and of course I laughed out loud in the middle of the night starting with 'gift' and continuing on and on. ^-^
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