| "The Heat of Autumn's First Chill" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you wrote this a long time ago and may be no longer interested in IY fandom, but I just read this fic for the first time and was surprised that it received so few reviews, given how good it is, and so wanted to write to let you know how much I enjoyed it. I marked it a 7 for originality, just because it's a pretty standard lemon, but I rated it a 9 for enjoyment factor and 10 for style of writing because it's written much better than most IY fanfics out there. Even if you're no longer interested in IY, I thought you might like to know that there are people out there still enjoying your writing.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spicy! You do write a nice lemon ^_^. Is this a one shot?
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: November 06, 2006 00:39 CST
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hmm, i love it. very heated content for such a crappy night. haha. i love how inuyasha goes off on a tangent after getting sat and re-opening his wounds. that needed to be said. i love it. kinky yet classic. nice.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 16:05 CST
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That was so sweet and romantic; You have Inuyasha's character down well. Inuyasha is so insecure behind his bluster that I can truly see him wanting to touch, wanting to go each next step and yet just waiting for the other shoe to drop and for Kagome to smack him.
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was awesome...as are all of your fanfics ^.^ and I have to agree with Wildthundakat, you write one hell of a lemon ~_^. Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! Lexi AKA Bubble-chan~_^
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Title: What a way to defrost...!
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well know, very interesting fact that our lil miko, is the one taking the iniciative this time, in such a provocative way, and good ol' kaede was the first one to notice, this time...lol I must say i have aquired a very fond taste to your writting style and limes and lemons, you write it with such realness such passion, that makes it PWP but not the one that you can find a dime-a-dozen...Cathy you are a very skilled, intelligent individual, and I admire you for that... I hope you keep sharing your fics with us, i look forward to reading you...I love your JOURNAL! Hugs and Kisses Pinkit-chan
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: November 03, 2006 07:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You always write great lemons. And, I love Inuyasha's comment about never promising to go to hell. So many people miss that. He never promised to go to hell with Kikyou, just to protect her. grins The scene with Kagome naked, one leg up and the other straight, with Inuyasha on top makes me think of Inuhanyounikkie's picture. Did you get some inspiration there? laughs Holler at you later. I have a much negleted story to catch up on. Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: mspickalo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 22:44 CST
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i loved the on shot it really reminded me of the acual chacters i was a great story look forward to reading more stories from you
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Title: wow yasha in a good mood at the end?
Reviewed By: lady silverfox aka mychelle 79 On: November 02, 2006 18:06 CST
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i knew if inuyasha got laid he would b in a really really really GOOD MOOD!!!!! good story please write more please!!!!
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 16:28 CST
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aww, that was so good. plus, it's perfect for the upcoming season. u always write good lemons.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 05:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really sweet.
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Reviewed By: kireinakao On: November 02, 2006 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was really good!! this should definitely be something you continue, you set it up and everything in the end. keep it going!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 00:29 CST
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Kaede you sneaky old miko you.Loved it!
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Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. It would make an awesome fic.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 21:50 CST
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oh i could so easily see this inspiring a chaptered story! i was gonna read it on LJ and then i got the notice that it was up so i had to review! almost a blanket (haori) fic but they had more restraint. a wonderful read especially for the weather (38 and rain). such fluff! made up for the lack of compassion our hanyou showed in the manga.
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