| "The Queen's Concubine" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: alakab4m [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 22:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know what would make this even better than it already is? if you continue it. i loved it and i kept on wishing there was more (: you are a really good writer keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: InuAngelInuDevil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 18:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please please please write this story continuing, it begs alone to be continued, just look at how you put it at the ending, it is mean to continue...please please please...and thank!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 18:50 EST
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This oneshot was funny and rather hot. Most of the time one doesn't get to read Kagome as the seducturess and Inuyasha as the trembling yet eager virgin. Not only was this a great lemon, it was also a rather fun read. Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: BloodyTears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 00:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O wow. it was hot yet sweet for some reason. i dunno. i'm weird. but maybe u could make it a lil longer? i'm quite curious. overall, not bad. and extremely creative. =]
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 22:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was just... wow... very good but i feel that it could be like a prologue... maybe you could continue and make it longer (just a thought though...) =)
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Title: please.....continue.....
Reviewed By: GDaywalker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 22:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definately a great fic and probably one of the only ones I've ever given a 9 on the overall rating. I'm a tough critic when it comes to fanfiction but the only thing I can find wrong with this fic is that it's not longer. I really, really hope you write more because this is a great fic that I beleive deserves to be expanded. Please respond if you care to, -GDaywalker
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Reviewed By: XIII Orginization On: November 06, 2006 19:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply marvelous, and could quite easily become a longer fic.
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Reviewed By: Alotta Profit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 23:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good as a stand alone, but this has the potential to be a continuation of one shots or a full blown story. Nice job. A.P.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: November 04, 2006 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD i love this fic! pretty original too ^^ i'd love to read more! >=D
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Reviewed By: SaggiBabii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 18:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow wow wow is all i can say da best BRAVO
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 17:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U r real good at writin lemons... I hope u keep it up and continue the story. Hurry up wit the next part!!
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 11:24 EST
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By gods, you really are good at writing this kind of fics...lemon with taste. keep going.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: November 03, 2006 10:59 EST
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one word: hot! i loved seeing inuyasha as the inexperienced virgin. not something we usually get to read. hmmm, hot sun, sand, and sweaty laborers followed by mind blowing sex...what more could we ask for? only more one shots! keep up the awesome work
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Reviewed By: cutemix On: November 03, 2006 10:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it! hope you write more fics
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 09:18 EST
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I love this story! it is awsome! i enjoyed reading it i do hope that you will add more to it and hopefully you'll get more wonderful reviews for this story because it is really good.
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