| "The Queen's Concubine" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lemon_Luvr On: February 21, 2013 21:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh this is just FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!! I want so much more of this story, seriously. |
Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 13:21 EDT
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This is so *utterly* fantastic. I'd love if you took the time to expand upon this bit by bit... maybe not a full-length story, but like what you did with the Fallen Angel storyline. *grins* This was HOT. Lucky dog InuYasha!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 15:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god please no. you must make this into a story i need more! please?! its amazing you are a spectacular riter keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: April 08, 2007 04:41 EDT
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I love this story! (Just like the rest of your stories ;D) Could you make this into a series like you did with the fallen angel one? They don't write good egyptians nowadays ^^
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Reviewed By: Marukireicho [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 21:05 EDT
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Oh, hells yeah! That was my kind of PWP! Loved it! It would so totally rule--and that's something I don't normally say--if you made, like, a sequel one-shot to this.
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Reviewed By: AJDD On: March 25, 2007 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What can I say. This has to be one of the best Inuyasha stories I have read. I mean for one, the characters are in different roles, I usaully hate these kind of fics, for one reason or another. I mean Inuyasha should be Inuyasha, and Kagome be Kagome. This fic however blew me away, it both caught my eye and made me want to read even more. Overall, the best. And do please, please, please make this a full story version, I bet it would be fantastic!!!! Wish the best of luck for more great stories, and possibly a full version to this great one-shot.
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Reviewed By: @____@ On: February 28, 2007 05:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHH!! All your lemons are so HOT!! *pant! *pant! Can you write a story or a continuation of this? Pretty please with a cherry on top *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: Twilight-Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn. And I mean Damn. I've read many of lemons before, but nothing like this. This was very enjoyable and I hope to see more from you in the future. Vix
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Reviewed By: scizophrenic panda On: January 15, 2007 15:41 EST
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I loved it! you should make this a whole story, not just a one shot.
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Reviewed By: XxhellzgurlxX [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 19:37 EST
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hey u kno ur one of my favs in my auther list i love ur storys just like a loved this one. keep it up u got a talent
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Title: Made a Fan out of me
Reviewed By: silver_Sesshomaru_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 00:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was not much of an Inuyasha Fan Fiction reader untill I read this. Or, my friend forced me to read this. It was a greatly written, as well as well exicuted story line. I was always angry at those who took the Inuyasha chatacters out of their place, but because of how big a fan I am of the Egyptian ways, this story fit perfictly into my tastes. Now not only am greatly into the Inuyasha storyline, but I am willing to say that I am not only glad you wrote thsi story, but I am glad someone out there has the same type of idea that I had for the storyline of the charcaters. Oh and, well done on many of your other creations. I greatly enjoy reading what you type. And please excuse me for any miss spelled words or incorrect use of grammer. I am currently up on my fourth day of all nighters because I have my project due tomarrow. >
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Reviewed By: alakab4m [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 22:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know what would make this even better than it already is? if you continue it. i loved it and i kept on wishing there was more (: you are a really good writer keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: InuAngelInuDevil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 18:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please please please write this story continuing, it begs alone to be continued, just look at how you put it at the ending, it is mean to continue...please please please...and thank!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 18:50 EST
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This oneshot was funny and rather hot. Most of the time one doesn't get to read Kagome as the seducturess and Inuyasha as the trembling yet eager virgin. Not only was this a great lemon, it was also a rather fun read. Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: BloodyTears [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 00:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O wow. it was hot yet sweet for some reason. i dunno. i'm weird. but maybe u could make it a lil longer? i'm quite curious. overall, not bad. and extremely creative. =]
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