| "Loose Ends" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Phillyghurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2002 16:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice! |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: October 05, 2002 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is your first Goku/Chichi fanfic? Get outta here! That was really good. I am very impressed. I love it when people show that Goku & Chichi CAN and DO make love. Not trying to be a sicko or anything, but come on people! How do you think they had 2 kids? By kissing!? I also like that you didn't make Goku a complete idiot, as most authors tend to do. Goku is not stupid. WEll, enough of that. Your story was sweet, and I htink you should write more G/CC stories! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 01, 2002 05:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Brilliant! I love the way you described Vegeta's emotional tug of war after he exited the HTC, as well as Bulma's reaction to his return. Little Trunks is just adorable, just purring and pissing all over mom. The completion of the bond was great even if it wasn't a lemon. My hentai mind filled in the blanks ^_~. Great job!! |
Reviewed By: jessie On: September 01, 2002 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a lovely story *sniff* of how goten came to be. |
Reviewed By: RELENA'SLUV On: August 30, 2002 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME LIKES ALOT!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 29, 2002 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! That was so beautiful. I was almost in tears. This fic is so well written and captures the emotions felt by all from the Sons to the Briefs. I always wondered when Goku found time to conceive a child with CC and it was that curiosity that led me to read this. I'm a hardcore B/V fan, but this touched me deeply. Kudos on a job well done!! |
