| "Top Banana" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: kakasott [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this funny, i never thought that they could be together.please write the next one i want to know what happends next.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 20:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another good chapter Raa.
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Title: My fav pairings
Reviewed By: Capito Celcior [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're making them good. My top three pairings are in fact; Nr3: Kaolla Su Nr2: Kanako Nr1: Motoko. And these three are seemingly becoming Keitaro's Harem? He deserves them? They are just too good. As long as there will be NO Narusegawa. I REALY dislike her. She's last in the line for me, after Haruka on 6th, Shinobu on 5th and Kitsune/mutsumi (they share fourth place in my line of favorites). Please continue. Oh, and I think Keitaro should freak out if any other girl would sart to use the word Man-Banana. Kaolla may be obsessed with the food (when will he realise that it is practically all she wants to eat...hehehe, and will she want to eat that sort of Banana too?)but if Kanako accidentaly uses it as well...man, what a word. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall pretty enjoyable so far, by chapter 2 when I post this review it's not terribly original yet, tons of other Prince Su type fics out there. I just hope this one goes the distance, as it starting to look very promising. I also sort of hope/feel some lime/lemon content would be appropriate in the later chapters. Eventually turning into one those super Keitaro harem fics... hehe
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for anouther great story. I can't wait to see what happens after the crash. I look forward to your next chapter, more Koalla.
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