Reviewed By:Hideto-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 20:21 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: I really like the story. The plot is interesting and the web of events keep the reader entertained. However the first chapters were very hard for me to read; I completely dislike the overflow of dialog. But if that's your style... I think the story would be more popular if all the chapters were formated like the fourth. Keep em coming!!