| "To live for you." Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: (lazy) randomreader504 On: May 21, 2008 15:10 EDT
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beautiful ending for a chapter, but not for the story. Really bad writer's block? Please try to continue. It's a good story.
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that... was beautiful. what a beautiful ending to that chapter. i cannot wait until the next chapter. very nicely done.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 13:49 EDT
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Beautiful kiss....Now what?
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ZOMG! That was so sweet, romantic, touching, humbling, dreamy, and such a tease! ~glomps Maloy~ You must write more for Demi!!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 19:35 EDT
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THAT was sweet. Such a nice build-up to a tender moment. Well-done. But, if he's not fighting it anymore, where do they go from here?
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 18:48 EDT
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Great chapter!!!! This story is fan-freaking-tastic!!! Keep it up!!
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 15:53 EDT
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*sigh* Just as good the second time around!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 15:06 EDT
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Beautiful. Just beautiful. So glad you continued this.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 22:18 EDT
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Love this fic! Very true to character, wonderful insight into Inu's mind. Your writing skills are excellent. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 21:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! I must say that I am truly impressed!! Being English your second language, you sure put many of us to shame!! Thank you for this wonderful story!! So far it has proven to be an excellent read and I for one will keep an eye on each and every update!! I look forward to the next chapters and I am placing this as one of my fav stories!! Thank you for sharing!! Hugs; Midcat
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness (not signed in) On: April 03, 2007 12:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha's temper knows no bounds! Next chapter please!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 20:16 EDT
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Nice chapter! Loved Inuyasha's thoughts about Kagome. Loved the interactions between the various members of the group. Very true to character -- spot-on. Looking forward to more!
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Charmander [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 18:32 EDT
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this is pretty good. it sounds like an episode. I too don't know much of the manga past 480 so you did pretty good
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 23:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say it and then run really fast! But wonderful chapter! I love the expressiveness in your writing, the metaphors and the way you turn a phrase is beautiful!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 23:00 EST
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Nice chapter. Inuyasha's thoughts about how his relationship/feelings for kagome are differnt from his for Kikyou were interesting. Though I wish he'd figure it out. It's great that he's planning on making sure he survives for Kagome's sake. Leave it to Shippou to call him on where his gaze was lingering. but Poor Inuyasha was lost in thought about Naraku -- he didn't even get to consciously appreciate the view. Ha! Wonder what the coming confrontation will be like? Can't wait for more!
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