| "To live for you." Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 11:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! You not only have a great view on the characters,and an interesting plot, your writting is enjoyable/funny/intriguing and for a second language it's astoundingly accurate in both meaning and composition! Wow! I hope you can update this soon as it's very hard to wait for updates on well written and ENJOYABLE stories. Thank You! Moussajinx
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 23:58 EST
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Just found this story -- it's fantastic!! I love the way Inuyasha is thinking and acting in this. Such a shame he doesn't realize how much trouble he would spare himself if he would just be open and honest with Kagome about his feelings, hopes, and fears. But, what can we expect? He's male, after all. I can't wait for your next update!!
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Reviewed By: pilar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 18:30 EST
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Oh yes please more..... I stumbled on this story and I have to say I just love it. Really nice characterization of Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 11:08 EST
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I think this chapter was very cute. Congrats on finishing finals and your A in English. Please update soon. I love continuations!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 20:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're so much better! I only saw three spelling mistakes, but take that with a grain of salt because I'm not good at catching them anyway. I think Inuyasha's actions are so cute. I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 21:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Your English is very good... much better than some of the people I read on here where it is their first language. ;) Let me know if you need a beta reader. :) I'm looking forward to the rest of your story.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 13:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost cried when I got the e-mail that you had updated! I've been wanting something to read so bad! I really liked this chapter it was very sweet and funny. There were some mispellings but really nothing major.
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Reviewed By: nindeoronra [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 20:36 EST
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I see another reviewer has pointed out the mistakes, so I'll not repeat them here. Most of them are something you'd not be able to catch on spell check, but just a mix-up with words. Stupid language of ours loves to have so many words that sound the same but have different spellings and different meanings (which/witch) for example. As for characterization, I'd say you're spot on...although I'm really not the best person to say this as I've only been into Inuyasha for a few weeks now, and haven't read any of the manga--I've only watched the English dubs until my eyes started bleeding... I say you've got a great story so far, and I'm looking forward to reading more. :-)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 11:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it! I think you've captured their personalities very well. As for spelling and grammar it was mostly stuff that I'm sure you would catch if you re-read your chapters very closely. I did find some words you mixed up. You confused "which" as in a choice with "witch" an evil woman who casts spells. You confused "knew" like something you had knowledge of, with "new" something you just bought. Also you confused "drug" with "drag" that just confusing present with past tense I think. And you Confused "made" creating something with "mad" angry emotion. I hope this helps. Other than those mistakes the story was great, you should be very proud; you write in English better than the majority of people who are born speaking it.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 19:36 EST
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Thank you for updating. I like your story and look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 18:23 EST
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it was good. im looking forward to reading more of it. As for mistakes, i only found freezing (frizzing) mispelled in ch. 2 and job (gob) mispelled in ch.4. All in all it was REALLY good. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kagome_Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 13:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I like it! Please update soon! :3
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 20:09 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You write well and have peaked my interest. I hope yo continue with this story. I like the first three chapters and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lazy mysticangeldust On: November 14, 2006 05:43 EST
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This is really one of the best fictions I've seen in a while. The trend anymore seems to be on AU and such. Not really my thing. But this seems realistic to the Inu universe and sweet. Looking foward to more.
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Reviewed By: ~Sami On: November 13, 2006 20:59 EST
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I like it so far -- nice start ^_^ I'll await your next update!
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