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| "Reluctant Obsessions" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 05:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. Oh, it's been a while since I read a good fic like this. I love "before" the events of the video game fics, especially when they deal with super sexy happenings like this. It all ties very nicely into "what could have been"s. You're style of writing is also very witty and wonderful. By far my favorite line was "It was only a lot later that memory supplied him with the script of his embarrassing babbling." Ah, that made me laugh for a good few minutes. The way you make the story flow is very well paced and realistic. It didn't feel rushed at all and I loved that you took time to at least explain some of the personality backgrounds for the more important characters. And everything is spell and grammar checked, oh thank you! Nothing kills the tone more than that for me, so thank you again for taking the time to do that. I hope to read more RE fics from you, but I don't know, this just seems so hard to top, you know. Good job, and thanks for the great read!
| Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 16:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow... That was... I don't know if I can say good, but it was very well written. I enjoyed the way you wrote the emotions of the guys. Good job...
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