| "Mother AT Sixteen" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: sessh's_luver On: June 04, 2008 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is crazy and i LUV it!!!!!!!! PLZ update SOON so i can luv it even MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Eh
Reviewed By: Brennen J On: August 08, 2007 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, mildly impressed.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 17:22 CDT
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aw. i like the story so far! keep up the great work. do they not know that kagome is pregnant yet? when is she going to tell them? oh please please please please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Katana Kiba On: July 18, 2007 14:53 CDT
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I have o life during the summer so I hang around here, and when you don't update, I have nothing to do! PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Katana : )
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Reviewed By: Katana Kiba On: July 07, 2007 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... you really know how to make an origional fic! But you seriously need somone to edit your work- or at least use spellcheck. And I have a very good idea of what could happen... but I'll keep my mouth shut (for once) Katana : )
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You mean in the last chapter the M.C. thats what it is... it the person who talks between the breaks of an act... Wonderful story!!
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Reviewed By: lollypop101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 08:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is crazy why aren't you writing anymore chapters???!!!!!!!!! if you want i cant give you some ideas but get writing!!!!
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Reviewed By: cool 2006 On: January 22, 2007 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story wright more
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 20:56 CST
Comment/Review:
its good....very well written, my only complaint is the chapters are short....^_^
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Reviewed By: THIS IS CUTE On: November 08, 2006 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A CUTE VERSION OF WHAT REALLIFE. IT REMINDS ME OF A LIFE TIME MOVIE
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Depressed~Soul~Waiting On: November 07, 2006 02:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Inuyasha going to come in any time sooon? And when is Kagome going to tell everybody shes Pregnant? And i'm guessing everybody either Half Demon or demon or miko ect...Soorry for all my Question, i tend to talk alot. I love your plot for this sory, I know its going to be a good one. Well i hope you update really soon, cause i want some answers to my questions lol. Welll i'm going to go and see if you have anymore storys. peace
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Reviewed By: Inuhanyouchick [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 21:42 CST
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wow... thats all i can think of saying right now .its really good
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Title: I Love it
Reviewed By: TI On: November 06, 2006 06:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! This story is so cute! Please update !
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