| "Alkalinity" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: January 27, 2007 12:16 CST
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Wow, I'm loving all the flashbacks. While it's sad, it's just so much fun to watch all the different times they met, and how, and how it ended tragically.. *sighs* I wish I could pray with all of my fangirl soul that they ended happy for once.... but they wouldn't want to stop meeting again and again, ne? Yeah...
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Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: November 18, 2006 13:09 CST
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I'm started to wonder if I will ever fully understand what the hell is going on with this. I might not, but that last chapter was pretty clear, so yay! Poor Axel... and poor Roxas! His memory just... fades away...
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Title: AGAIN KICKS ASS
Reviewed By: Finalsoragirl123 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 18:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I USE WIKIPEDIA YEAH! OUT OF CURIOSITY WHAT ARE YOUR INTRESTES
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Title: kicks ass
Reviewed By: Finalsoragirl123 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this srory so keep on writing also um Use the japanese names for at least one chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!! I got to get used to them Bye.
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Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: November 10, 2006 21:32 CST
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Okay. So today I asked my friend (who dislikes yaoi) Who the heck the people were. She blanched and almost refused to tell me XD She already knew it was for a yaoi pairing, I love her to death because while freaking she told me anyways, and then gave me the run down on most common boy/boy pairings and such for the fandom. She's so going to be a convert... but! I am distracted! And confused.... T_T I missed the part where someone sucked on his neck for Chapter 3, how exactly did that get there? But otherwise I am utterly captivated
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Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 06:25 CST
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*gapes* Whoa, shit. Okay.... so I don't know this fandom... like at ALL... but I love your writing, so I was all "HELL YEAH! I'll go for it!!!" and wow. This kicks major ass. God sent this plot bunny to you XD
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