| "Tolerant Intolerance" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Perfect!
Reviewed By: Shimio [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never read a Yaoi fic written like this and you deserve a trophy. To bring out the character's sensitive sides and create a story line that suited them perfectly. I loved it. It was cute, smexy and it belongs in my fav's. This'll deffinatly be one I pass along to a few people I know. I look forward to any future chapters! Awsome Job!
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 01:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please tell me you're going to continue this? Please?! This is so beautifully written, and it brought me to near tears.
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Reviewed By: ForgottenPrincess..still to lazy to sign in On: June 24, 2007 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful. Beautiful. I love your musica choice, and even if the whole thing is rather sweet, i couldn't see it any other way. If kakashi thinks that Genma and Raidou's are sweet that is only because he can not see himself when he is with Iruka. It's weird it's almost like i want to say more, but at this moment words escape me...
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Reviewed By: ForgottenPrincess...too lazy to sign in On: June 23, 2007 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a wonderful chapter. It's so diffrent from the other story i was reading of your on adultff...but it's just as good in its way. I love that song Chasing Cars...i think everyone who listens to it must, i mean it's so beautiful. I also think that everyone wants what that singer is singing about, it's beautiful and fit this story. I am glad that iruka and kakashi have found it...i believe in different dimensions so who is to say that somewhere in some dimension what you just wrote happened...luck them.
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Reviewed By: animebarb [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 05:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
-I really enjoyed this, it was very well written and thought out. Thanks so much for a really good read and write more soooon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lupi On: December 16, 2006 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw... I love this... XP Kakashi's lactose intolerant and Iruka knows... Aww... I think the reason I love this so much is because it's Kakashi who's at home worrying, not Iruka... We didn't read about Iruka's mission as it happened or Kakashi's worrying, but we know it was there from the way they're acting... But god, that lactose intolerant thing got me... XP Kakashi's not that perfect after all... It had me in giggles... Great work... ^_^
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Title: eh....review?
Reviewed By: demee On: November 24, 2006 02:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its very well written and i almost started crying at one pointl ol
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Reviewed By: tinkrbell3 On: November 15, 2006 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. It's sweet, funny and romantic.You're good.
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Reviewed By: Killer_Muraki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very good. Thank you for sharing it, I enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 03:54 CST
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SO CUTE!! UBER FLUFF!!! Really, it is a sweet tale, and one that can even work within the framework of the anime and manga (really, its can if allowed to). Plus, this was really sweet and personalized. A good piece, though at times, teeth-rottingly so. Keep working on this stuff, it's great.
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