| "Just Simple Curiosity" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 07:52 CDT
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I really like this! I'm known as an Imp or Raccoon Dog. So yeah I'm unusual. This was really awesome! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: May 04, 2007 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter! Also, I hope your computer stops crashing on you.
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 07:15 CDT
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Bout time! lol. good chapter, but a lot of big words. lol. nice use of Sereku, he is one regular badass. wasnt expecting the kiss, but oh well...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: March 20, 2007 21:40 CDT
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Nice fight scene can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 15:54 CDT
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YES! It was very good... but aww man, i was hoping that sereku wouldnt get embaressed like that. he is my character, so i didnt forsee that. anyway, nother great chapter, keep up the great work... Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: March 05, 2007 21:30 CST
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I like the new character, he's kool. :)
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 06:57 CST
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YES! That is exactly wat i would have expected form Sereku. I cant wait to see their spar, well technically i will have to read it...Anyway. Great chapter, cant wait till the next one.
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: February 25, 2007 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot! New character!
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 07:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! Finally i get another character debut, i was looking forward to this chapter. The changes were obvious instantly but, hey, that just made him better. U symbolized his persona perfectly. Cant wait for the next chapter...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: February 22, 2007 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you killed off Neji. Well, I bet that Aya will be scarred for life.
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally. Aya should have prepared herself for a loss, it was inevidable that she would lose one of her firends. She should have just accepted it. But i cant wait to see how my character comes into play, so hurry up, please? Anyway, excellent chapter yet again. Keep up the good work...DragonLord
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darn it, i cant believe i missed that chapter, anyways, it was a good one. I didnt even think of one way to get it out until i read it, and it wasnt even wta Aya used, she could have knocked him out and got it out all the easier. I want to know wat is up with the vial, i am looking forward to the twist revealed...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: February 19, 2007 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who was the person who had his chest ripped apart? Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry i couldnt read ur newest chapters till now. I was busy on a chat thing. U know how u said that she coudldnt get the antidote out of him? Well while i read it, i thought of about...3 or 4 ways to get it out. But thats just me, my imagination is large enough to think of those ways, but all of em r REALLY bloody. Hey , do u mind if i give u a character? I thought of a really cool one. If so i will e-mail it to u. If u dont accept now, another friend of mine will get it. Thought i'd let u know, cause my character would do better in ur story. Still a really great story, keep up the good work... Dragon_Lord
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Title: this fic is good so far
Reviewed By: Serenas number1 fan On: February 19, 2007 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is awsome my favorite on this site but i think you should have made your selfbased charreie fall in love with naruto while maybe trying to cope with the pain inside from haveing a demon locked iside him deep within
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