| "Just Simple Curiosity" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 09:15 CST
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(^O^) HOLY SHIT THAT WAS DDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN WEIRD and good detail but still well i dont know wat to say but i am awestruck i swear my jaw was probably on the ground at wat Aya did i mean WTF but u can take this however u want good or bad.
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 20:15 CST
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DANG Y DO I GET THIS KIND OF LUCK DAMN
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 20:15 CST
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srry that last one didnt finish it was (>_
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 20:13 CST
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............... d(^_^)b...........uhhh..........i dont get it...........=O I GET IT.......no i dont......... (^_-) *raised eyebrow* dont tell me your going to mke this like THAT or not? (>_
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Title: Yay! last chapter was lemony
Reviewed By: psychic guardian angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hooray those outfits were smexy i personally thought that naruto would have went after sakura but him possibly being with sasuke is good too! (im not a major fan of yaois but they are pretty good) but the iruka and kakashi part kinda freaked me out oh well its your story so you can write what you want. keep writing cause this story rocks!
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 16:09 CST
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i was curios about one thing why is it that u rated this story X when it doesnt seem to be? and...LOL I AM THE EXACT OPPOSITE OF AYA I ACTUALLY GET KINDA ANGRY IF I DONT WAKE UP EARLY.also i think i know what kind of place that club is *wink wink*(LMAO) and i wonder if that will be the reason u made this X hmmm i wonder
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 06:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVADO BRAVADO BRAVADO i love the story and the story line its interesting and this is like the only one of two i've rated with tens well i dont have much moree to say but where did u get inspiration for the characters? and i dont pick favs so i wont say urs or hers is my fav.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: bloodkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was fantastic :D WIRTE MORE OR ELSE *holds out a bunch of spinach....feel the wrath of vegies. yuck....
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Title: Its alright
Reviewed By: CluelessOne On: November 13, 2006 04:49 CST
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The story is alright and all but where's the conflict? Plot? Also i think you should add more romance to the story and what are the pairs here? Somehow i think Naruto/OC but in some places Sasuke/OC. Make things more clear please.
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