| "Just Simple Curiosity" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 06:57 CST
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YES! That is exactly wat i would have expected form Sereku. I cant wait to see their spar, well technically i will have to read it...Anyway. Great chapter, cant wait till the next one.
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: February 25, 2007 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot! New character!
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 07:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! Finally i get another character debut, i was looking forward to this chapter. The changes were obvious instantly but, hey, that just made him better. U symbolized his persona perfectly. Cant wait for the next chapter...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: February 22, 2007 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you killed off Neji. Well, I bet that Aya will be scarred for life.
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally. Aya should have prepared herself for a loss, it was inevidable that she would lose one of her firends. She should have just accepted it. But i cant wait to see how my character comes into play, so hurry up, please? Anyway, excellent chapter yet again. Keep up the good work...DragonLord
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darn it, i cant believe i missed that chapter, anyways, it was a good one. I didnt even think of one way to get it out until i read it, and it wasnt even wta Aya used, she could have knocked him out and got it out all the easier. I want to know wat is up with the vial, i am looking forward to the twist revealed...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: AlphaBeta On: February 19, 2007 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who was the person who had his chest ripped apart? Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry i couldnt read ur newest chapters till now. I was busy on a chat thing. U know how u said that she coudldnt get the antidote out of him? Well while i read it, i thought of about...3 or 4 ways to get it out. But thats just me, my imagination is large enough to think of those ways, but all of em r REALLY bloody. Hey , do u mind if i give u a character? I thought of a really cool one. If so i will e-mail it to u. If u dont accept now, another friend of mine will get it. Thought i'd let u know, cause my character would do better in ur story. Still a really great story, keep up the good work... Dragon_Lord
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Title: this fic is good so far
Reviewed By: Serenas number1 fan On: February 19, 2007 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is awsome my favorite on this site but i think you should have made your selfbased charreie fall in love with naruto while maybe trying to cope with the pain inside from haveing a demon locked iside him deep within
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, its me... u can't guess, i feel sad. It is me, DRAGONCOREY, i was banned so i had to make a new name, neway, huury up with the update... please.
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 11:50 CST
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WOOHOO! FINALLY SOME REALLY DETAILED FIGHT SCENES! ABOUT TIME! Anyway, my interest is renewed... :) keep up the good work. There are two more things i wanna say. 1: That way-a-werewolf-heals just seems like... BS, no offense to you or that author. 2: That comment at the begining of your story... i dont EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY, all i can is... WHAT THE HELL? Ok i got that stuff off of my chest, now just keep updateing
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 08:50 CST
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Oh and i forgot to say: THAT WAS ONE HELL OF A TIMESKIP...I'D SAY THAT WAS THE LONGEST ONE I'VE EVER HEARD OF...WOW...srry i forgot that.
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 08:47 CST
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Uh... I just want to give u a warning: I just woke up and i am a little sleepy, since i didn't get to bed till 1 in the morning. So if i have a lot of bad words in here don't be surprised...FUCK MY BRAIN HURTS, what did u mean about the Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura thing. Every time i think about the approach from that my brains HURTS...SHIT, SHIT, SHIT I AM...i don't know how to say this in a nice way...no offense...*looks up and says fast* I am starting to lose intrest in your story...sorry i can't help it...it still is pretty good but i cant help wat u want to do... So unless u can volly the love stuff with good fights then i could have a sky-rocket in intrest... but then again i know i am 1 person so it doesn't really matter wat any single person says...Oh Well.
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 16:54 CST
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d(-_-)b............*barfs in a conviently placed trash can* WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT *begins retching* FIRST I NEARLY GET A CONCUSSION TODAY, BY GETTING MY TEMPLE HIT ON SOLID METAL, AND NOW I READ NEJI GETTING CLOSE TO AYA HOLY SHIT... aside from that another great chapter...later
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Reviewed By: DRAGONCOREY [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 16:51 CST
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OOOOOOOOOOOOKKKKKKKKKKKKKKAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY that was something that burned holes in my eyes *holes appear during reading* AAAHHHHHHH SHIT MY EYES THEY ARE BURNING AND BLEEDING man i wish i had never read that Neji part that is NOT wat i expected at all.
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