"Prelude -- Oritsu" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Meggie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 13:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Whoo-hoo! I finally got off my butt and decided to review your story! I know, I had read it before, but you comment on all my artwork, so I need to comment on your stories! Great job, you know that already. =) You rock ... baka. Hehe, talk to you later. |
Reviewed By: Strutline On: May 14, 2002 10:43 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very original story. I hope you keep writing about Oritsu. I saw the fanart of her and I thought that you did a very good job of matching her personality with her looks. |
Reviewed By: Bulma6189 On: May 13, 2002 21:05 CDT Comment/Review: This story comes before your other fic, right? I don't really understand the connection though. Will Turles and Oritsu meet up later in the other story? I sure hope that she comes up again in your writing. She is a really interesting character. |