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| "Bloody Wrist" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: D-Reaper Originalle [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original, but it was kind of, well, really rushed. Before I knew it, the boys were in bed together- which isn't a bad thing in itself... However, I felt like this moved too fast and with too little explanation for the action, even for a quickie fic. At some points, it was a little painful to read because of that. I understand the feeling of wanting to jump right into the smut, but I always try to avoid that urge because it makes the reading more enjoyable for the audience.
| Reviewed By: Vague86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope he didn't die as Ty and Max will never do it again if he did. I enjoyed this as it wasnt just plainsmut. Thank you for puttingthought into your story
| Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww....that one was kinda sad ;__;, but you did good...I'm glad I can be your first reviwer, good job, love ya' ^~
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