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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 26, 2004 23:57 CDT
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*Look at her last review* Opps, I had some typos and mistakes in that review. Chapter 12: Ah...They got a new dog. Komachi Ayako: I can't belive Hercule did that! Xiahou Fumi: *is watch the fight with Oakley* Saiyanman...is start to remind me Sailor Moon... Go Triforce kick that lady butt! Yin Yi`Jing:*Chukles* I am happy that Trey and Tien reconcilate. Chapter 13: Is is Becauz Isaiso? and he from Street Fighter? Xiahou Fumi:The Saiyans were...WHAT!?!? Komachi Ayako: I am surpise that Becauz doesn't have a sore throat yet. Yin Yi`Jing:Good Luck, Young Videl in get strong. 17 Chapter left...Alright!...I think.
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 25, 2004 23:56 CDT
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*Sing the opening song of Dragonball Z* Chapter 10: ....I don't know who I should feel sorry for more...Trey or Tien? Yin Yi`Jing:*Glares at Tien with her silver eye* That is still not a good reason for what you did, Tien Chapter 11: ....To many Gohans..AHHH!!!!!!*Run off scream* Xiahou Fumi:*Sweatdrops*Um...I think I should being Veglma back*Run off to being Veglma back* Komachi Ayako and Yin Yi`Jing:*Look at when the Vegetas show up* I didn't know Vegeta mellow that much... Xiahou Fumi with Veglma:Yeah, at least they didn't have any Friezas show up *snikers* Go, Bulmas! Show the Vegetas whos boss! Komachi Ayako:*Look at the end of the chapter* Yes, They made it back home.
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 24, 2004 23:01 CDT
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La La La....Still review...La La La La La.... Chapter 8: Oh Great..The moon... And Gohan has his tail back... Komachi Ayako:Briefsmobile....Has Bulma watch to many Batman movies? Xiahou Fumi:*Is watch the fight with giant ape Gohan*...He grow his tail back!? Yin Yi`Jing:Well now Videl know the truth of the Cell Games Chapter 9:....Woah...That was a interesting world. Xiahou Fumi:Yeah... Yin Yi`Jing: Stupid Tien! You shouldn't have done that! 21 chapters left to review...Yay!
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 24, 2004 01:02 CDT
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I wish I had more than 1500 characters to make a comments on the chapters..Oh well, The story is going to get a lot of reviews form me. Xiahou Fumi:Shut up! Start doing the comments!! *Glare at Xiahou Fumi* Chapter 5: ....Nice costume, I think it look better than the first. *Xiahou Fumi, Komachi Ayako, and Yin Yi`Jing nodded their heads in agreement* Chapter 6:*Look at Vegeta's preference for a female and then at Bulma*...Well, He got luckly in get a mate that fits his preference... Yin Yi`Jing:*smirks really sinister as she watch Chi Chi punch out the geek* Chi Chi, a alien...Yeah Right! Komachi Ayako:Remind me not to get in the way of a hungry Saiyan. Xiahou Fumi:Yeah, If you want to keep your hand. Chapter 7: Evil Cookie!?...Um.... Yin Yi`Jing: That one way to kill a giant cake monster... To be continue...
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 23, 2004 23:26 CDT
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still commenting on the chapters... Chapter 3:*sniggers* Roshi got a taste of his own medicine. Yin Yi`Jing:Thankfully if I met Roshi I will be safe from him. Xiahou Fumi: Yeah, you are 99 years old. Yin Yi`Jing:*Smirks* and still as fit as I was at 50. Komachi Ayako:Poor Gohan, get mistake for Goku. Chapter 4:...Videl, it was the latter. Goku is from a alien race that goes around destroying planets...at Least they were do that, now almost all are dead. Yin Yi`Jing:*Smirk * I guess no one tell Bardock to not judge a book by it cover... To be continue...Have I confuse you at all yet?
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 23, 2004 00:49 CDT
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I will comment on all or some of the chapters. Chapter 1:...Poor Trey. Videl... you will soon find that Ki isn't tricks. Chapter 2:.......*Is speechless at Gohan's stupid poses*................. Xiahou Fumi:...I wonder if someone can shot a Kamehame ha with their eyes? Yin Yi`Jing:....are you nuts, young one!? Xiahou Fumi:...Just shut up, old one. Yin Yi`Jing:Trigun...isn't that name of that anime with Vash the...Um...what was his last part of his name again? Komachi Ayako: Stampede, Yin Yi`Jing. Yin Yi`Jing:Thank you, young ninja. ..........I can't figure out what is worse...Gohan's poses or the Ginyu Force's ones. Komachi Ayako:I say both Xiahou Fumi:I agree To be continue....
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Reviewed By: LilVi On: January 24, 2003 23:19 CST
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wow! great story dont leave me hangin! I have to admit some parts it was just a little to cheesey for my taste...(the superhero thing was like 0.o) |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't imagine why I thought mm.org would let me know when this fic was updated just because it is on my list of favorites...:::disgusted:::
I was THREE chapters behind!!!! AGH!
I still can not believe that no one is reviewing this story...This is one of the most, original, creative, well-written, enjoyable, fics on the net right now.
There were so many really wonderful bits in the last three chapters...I can't tell you which were my favs...but I gotta tell you, I loved having multiple Gohan's...and Vegita's. You did such a terrific job, getting all of the nuances of their characters down, and then making them all interact with themselves...I love it.
I am so, enjoying this story. Please keep me posted when you update?
Jada
RavenDakini@aol.com or JadaKirin@msn.com |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good so far right more dont leave me hanging |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good so far right more dont leave me hanging |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good so far right more dont leave me hanging |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good so far right more dont leave me hanging |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2002 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I just read this whole fic so far, and I can not believe you only have 2 reviews...are you posted at fanfiction.net? Is this a repost or something like that where you lost your reviews?
I am genuinely astounded. This is one of the most unique, well written, fics I've had the pleasure of stumbling on...and believe me, I've read tons of them.
Not only is this going on my favorites list, because I am dying for the next chapter...but I'm gonna tell everyone I know to come read and review this thing.
Skillful, effective, character development, keeping well within everyone's beloved character roles...
Terrifically fast-paced action, and truly singular plot evolution...
I am jealous. : ) This is something to aspire to .
Sincerely,
JadaKirin
JadaKirin@msn.com or
RavenDakini@aol.com
Keep it coming. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 10:09 CDT
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CH.8's plot was old the circle thing corny but in the end it was too damn good ta change :D i really do like your fic in fact im siting here waiting for more so till then i think that a game of 'Lords of Magic' sounds good...do baibai:P |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 17:24 CDT
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NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EVIL EVIL HAS BEFALLEN THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... i really need to lay off on the sugar...
:)mizu:P
ps. plzplzplz e-mail me when you update |
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