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Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 10, 2004 20:54 CDT
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*Is sleeping*...ZZZzzzz....Wake up!...Zzz...Huh? Do the stupid comments!...Grr... Chapter 28:*Eyes ablaze with Rages*Must...Kill...Hercule,...Lazarus...and...all ...the...humans...that...chant...Lazarus...name!! Komachi Ayako: No...*Weeps for Kyuushi* *Is chant"KILL!" over and over* Xiahou Fumi:Err... KILL! KILL! KILL! KI....*is knock out by Yin Yi`Jing* Chapter 29:*Is still knock out*...... Komachi Ayako:*Is weeping for all the good angels death* Xiahou Fumi:I hope Lazarus die a painful death... Chapter 30:*Is waken*....Vegeta is a BABY!?...Err... Komachi Ayako:This is going to be a interesting adventure... 0 chapters left....Please update soon or I will sic a million Chibi King Kais at you!*Komachi Ayako, Xiahou Fumi, and Yin Yi`Jing stare at Veglma*...What?
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 07, 2004 22:22 CDT
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*Is still plotting the death and maybe torture of Lazarus and....Hercule* Chapter 26:.....Where did Vegeta teleport the frog, I wonder? Komachi Ayako:*Watch the Vegeta and Bulma moment*Awww... Chapter 27: ...Must...Kill...all...of....those... humans...that...call...Trunks...a...fake. Komachi Ayako:Good job, Vegeta! You made your son feel better. Xiahou Fumi:*Grins evilly as she watch Bulma sent some flying with a punch*Good Job,Bulma... 3 chapters left....*Weeps*
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 05, 2004 21:30 CDT
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*Is still plotting the death and maybe torture of Lazarus* Chapter 24: ....Saiyaball? Um...must be a weird version of a Pokeball. Komachi Ayako:*Pales at the thought of Yamcha and Bardock together* ...Ugh...Bad...images...must...get.. .them...out...of...my...head!*Trieds to get rid of the images* Xiahou Fumi and Yin Yi`Jing:Thankfully, we didn't read that part. .....I agree, that gave me bad images...*Pukes* Yin Yi`Jing:...to get away form this topic... Lazarus is getting on my nerves. Xiahou Fumi:Yeah... I wonder what the other blade that Yinyo has is called?Blade of Mass Killing? Hm...interesting now we have two people who are animals that were humans. Komachi Ayako: Again...Poor, Launch and Lunch. Chapter 25: *Is watch the fight Vegeta Vs Goten and Trunks* Wow!*Whines as Goten and Trunks slam right into each other* Triple ow... Xiahou Fumi:*Blinks at Bulma* Bulma... you got to stop be so egotistical... Komachi Ayako:Ah....I like the end part of this chapter. 5 Chapters left....*cryings*
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 04, 2004 21:38 CDT
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*Is do the tap dance*... Well you stop that and do the comments!?........Oh all right.... Chapter 22: Pikkon is a pilot? How did that happen? Xiahou Fumi:*Read what Lazarus want to do*...No anger at all? That will be one boring universe. Komachi Ayako:Poor Chi Chi...I hope she get uninvisible Yin Yi`Jing:*Shakes her head* Vegeta and his desire to beat Goku... Chapter 23: Yay! Gohan, Videl, and Trey are going to get their past lifes memories back. Xiahou Fumi:Well now, Goten and Trunks know about Goku. That makes it six now. Komachi Ayako:Poor Launch, what did Lazarus to you? 7 Chapters left...Hurray?
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 03, 2004 21:43 CDT
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*Is plotting the death of Lazarus....Muhahahha!* Chapter 20:*Is watching the fight* Go! Gohan, Videl, and Trey. Kick the Angel of Death butt! Xiahou Fumi:Hm...Lazarus is almost like Buu in the fact he(Buu) kill almost all the Kaioshins. Yin Yi`Jing:.....Lazarus is just not a pink thing that likes candy... Komachi Ayako:It is funny that bad guy is the Angel of Life. .....You mean the INSANE Angel of Life. Chapter...Um..21?: .....Superheroes don't look fearsome when they do poses...It make them look even more stupider. Xiahou Fumi:.....How did they get Vegeta to be a superhero!?! Yin Yi`Jing:.....I think Bulma use food to get Vegeta and Trunks to be superheroes. Komachi Ayako:...Did Gohan do the puppys eyes attack? Seer...That has to be Bardock.
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 29, 2004 22:39 CDT
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*Is plotting the death of Hercule and Freiza...Oh Wait, Freiza is dead already...Darn IT!* Chapter 18: Ohh...It be fun to see who wins the bet. Xiahou Fumi:*is watching 18 punch out Becauz Isaiso* Good Job, 18! Komachi Ayako: All right! Bardock and Krillian find out what happen to Goku. Yin Yi`Jing:*Smirks* Gohan and Videl on a date...Good job, Young Trey. Chapter 19: I don't know who I want to kill the most Hercule or....Adam. Yin Yi`Jing:*snickers* You did a good job, Goldheart. Vegeta need to be take down a notch or two. Xiahou Fumi:So that how they married, May he will turn back in the person he was before the Cell's Games. Komachi Ayako:*whines as she watchs Gohan slam right into a building*.....Ouch. Hm....Chi Chi know that Goku is Goldheart...So that makes it four people who know Goku is Goldheart. 11 Chapters left.....WooHoo?
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 29, 2004 00:33 CDT
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*Sing the ending song of Yu Yu Hakusho* Chapter 16: It interesting to see Chi Chi and Goku some times say and think the same thing. Komachi Ayako:Yay! Goku get to spent time with his family. Chapter...Um..What the chapter again? It is 17, you idiot! ...Shut up, Xiahou. No. ...Grrr!!: I am going to KILL Hercule!*Eyes glows with rage* Yin Yi`Jing:Why kill him when can you torture him?*Sinister smirks* *Sinister smirks in equal to Yin Yi`Jing's smirk* That is a good idea. Xiahou Fumi:*back fearful away from Veglma and Yin Yi`Jing*...Um...I'm scared now.....Wait a moment! Suno married Hercule? How in the HFIL did that happen!? Komachi Ayako:....I hate to be Hercule when those two get their hands on him. *look at the end of the chapter*It nice to see them in high spirits 13 chapters left....Still no idea why I am do this.
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 27, 2004 23:54 CDT
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*Is sing the opening song of Blue Seed* Chapter 14: So that what happen to Goku, he got turn into a dog. Komachi Ayako:......It going to be awhile for Gohan to get over his fear of guns. Chapter 15: I wonder who the enemy is? Oh well, We will find out soon enough. Xiahou Fumi:Stare at what Kyuushi did to Vegeta*......*is speechless* Yin Yi`Jing:Diva and Pop Star...those where interesting supervillainesses... Komachi Ayako: A group power up? That is a first. .......Yajarobie...fighting the Angel of Death...Bwhahahhahah*fall off her chair and start to roll on the foor laughing madly* 15 chapters left...Why am I write down how many chapters I have left to read and review?
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 26, 2004 23:57 CDT
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*Look at her last review* Opps, I had some typos and mistakes in that review. Chapter 12: Ah...They got a new dog. Komachi Ayako: I can't belive Hercule did that! Xiahou Fumi: *is watch the fight with Oakley* Saiyanman...is start to remind me Sailor Moon... Go Triforce kick that lady butt! Yin Yi`Jing:*Chukles* I am happy that Trey and Tien reconcilate. Chapter 13: Is is Becauz Isaiso? and he from Street Fighter? Xiahou Fumi:The Saiyans were...WHAT!?!? Komachi Ayako: I am surpise that Becauz doesn't have a sore throat yet. Yin Yi`Jing:Good Luck, Young Videl in get strong. 17 Chapter left...Alright!...I think.
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 25, 2004 23:56 CDT
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*Sing the opening song of Dragonball Z* Chapter 10: ....I don't know who I should feel sorry for more...Trey or Tien? Yin Yi`Jing:*Glares at Tien with her silver eye* That is still not a good reason for what you did, Tien Chapter 11: ....To many Gohans..AHHH!!!!!!*Run off scream* Xiahou Fumi:*Sweatdrops*Um...I think I should being Veglma back*Run off to being Veglma back* Komachi Ayako and Yin Yi`Jing:*Look at when the Vegetas show up* I didn't know Vegeta mellow that much... Xiahou Fumi with Veglma:Yeah, at least they didn't have any Friezas show up *snikers* Go, Bulmas! Show the Vegetas whos boss! Komachi Ayako:*Look at the end of the chapter* Yes, They made it back home.
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 24, 2004 23:01 CDT
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La La La....Still review...La La La La La.... Chapter 8: Oh Great..The moon... And Gohan has his tail back... Komachi Ayako:Briefsmobile....Has Bulma watch to many Batman movies? Xiahou Fumi:*Is watch the fight with giant ape Gohan*...He grow his tail back!? Yin Yi`Jing:Well now Videl know the truth of the Cell Games Chapter 9:....Woah...That was a interesting world. Xiahou Fumi:Yeah... Yin Yi`Jing: Stupid Tien! You shouldn't have done that! 21 chapters left to review...Yay!
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 24, 2004 01:02 CDT
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I wish I had more than 1500 characters to make a comments on the chapters..Oh well, The story is going to get a lot of reviews form me. Xiahou Fumi:Shut up! Start doing the comments!! *Glare at Xiahou Fumi* Chapter 5: ....Nice costume, I think it look better than the first. *Xiahou Fumi, Komachi Ayako, and Yin Yi`Jing nodded their heads in agreement* Chapter 6:*Look at Vegeta's preference for a female and then at Bulma*...Well, He got luckly in get a mate that fits his preference... Yin Yi`Jing:*smirks really sinister as she watch Chi Chi punch out the geek* Chi Chi, a alien...Yeah Right! Komachi Ayako:Remind me not to get in the way of a hungry Saiyan. Xiahou Fumi:Yeah, If you want to keep your hand. Chapter 7: Evil Cookie!?...Um.... Yin Yi`Jing: That one way to kill a giant cake monster... To be continue...
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 23, 2004 23:26 CDT
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still commenting on the chapters... Chapter 3:*sniggers* Roshi got a taste of his own medicine. Yin Yi`Jing:Thankfully if I met Roshi I will be safe from him. Xiahou Fumi: Yeah, you are 99 years old. Yin Yi`Jing:*Smirks* and still as fit as I was at 50. Komachi Ayako:Poor Gohan, get mistake for Goku. Chapter 4:...Videl, it was the latter. Goku is from a alien race that goes around destroying planets...at Least they were do that, now almost all are dead. Yin Yi`Jing:*Smirk * I guess no one tell Bardock to not judge a book by it cover... To be continue...Have I confuse you at all yet?
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 23, 2004 00:49 CDT
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I will comment on all or some of the chapters. Chapter 1:...Poor Trey. Videl... you will soon find that Ki isn't tricks. Chapter 2:.......*Is speechless at Gohan's stupid poses*................. Xiahou Fumi:...I wonder if someone can shot a Kamehame ha with their eyes? Yin Yi`Jing:....are you nuts, young one!? Xiahou Fumi:...Just shut up, old one. Yin Yi`Jing:Trigun...isn't that name of that anime with Vash the...Um...what was his last part of his name again? Komachi Ayako: Stampede, Yin Yi`Jing. Yin Yi`Jing:Thank you, young ninja. ..........I can't figure out what is worse...Gohan's poses or the Ginyu Force's ones. Komachi Ayako:I say both Xiahou Fumi:I agree To be continue....
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Reviewed By: LilVi On: January 24, 2003 23:19 CST
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wow! great story dont leave me hangin! I have to admit some parts it was just a little to cheesey for my taste...(the superhero thing was like 0.o) |
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