| "The Balcony" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Cute, Interesting, and definetly fun
Reviewed By: cody7799 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I think I have full rights to say... AWESOME WORK, MORE MORE MORE!!!! I really hope you continue this story, even if it has been forever since the last update. But yeah, it's worth reading time and time again... Makes a nice mess in my bedroom XD Anyway, great.. Everything.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 10:06 CST
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Well, nearly a year since the first chapter was posted, AND STILL NO THIRD CHAPTER!!! UPDATE!!! Besides that, this story still rocks at this later date. Just update soon, we all want to read more impossible digimon sex, okay? Ja ne.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 22:30 CDT
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That was a hot chapter with some plot! ;) I do hope Izzy doesn't become a regular when Veemon and Davis make love. =P I liked it better when it was just the two of them but I suppose this was just for science, I hope, lol. It'll be interesting to see where you take this story and I'll be looking out for new chapters in the future. ^^
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 12:38 CDT
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OMMFG, THAT WAS HOT!!! Shit, and it STILL defies what should be physically possible (though this is fiction, so whatever). Anyway, that was some hot digimon action, and a good science explanation. Thanks, and update again soon (though a 4 moth wait for something that hot is worth it. Well, that's it, later.
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Reviewed By: Wing Guardian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS FREAKING AWESOME! GREAT ACTION WITH A BIT OF HUMOR! KEEP GOING!
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Title: Absolutly Astounding!
Reviewed By: Midnight_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I Have To Say, That Is One Of The Best Digimon Fanfictions I Have Ever Read. The Way You Incorporated Davis's And Veemon/Flamedramon's Love For Each Other In A Tender And Caring Way Was Brilliant. And I Must Say, Pretty Hot Bed Scene Also. Keep Writing Great Stories Like These!
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Reviewed By: Wing Guardian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS EXTREMELY HOT, LITTLE BIT COMICAL TOO. DO ANOTHER ONE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DeepBlue1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet jesus in a hand basket!! That was wonderfull! I mena heck you spelled alot of words wrong...like Meet for instance you spelled it Meat...but still its a dang good yaoi!! Thumbs up 8/10
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
O____O That...THAT WAS AMAZING! HELLZ YA! Hope you do more!
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Title: Kawaii
Reviewed By: Shad-ai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, that was cute. The whole concern about how the others would act around him in the coming days, and how he found love in Veemon (and Flamedramon) was just wonderful. It deserves the marks it got from me.
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