| "Live For Me" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Blonde Demon013 On: November 25, 2006 02:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story so far! please update soon! u are a very good author! update soon please!
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still no resolution on the romantic front, but I don't mind at all. I like a bit of prolonged angst before things get all fixed up. I particularly like how you're writing IY's internal struggle. There are more spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing terribly bad. You might want to work with a beta reader to help clean up little stuff like that to make your fic more polished. I'm not saying that your writing isn't good, but it could be even better.
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. It's nice to see IY facing his fears and -- one hopes -- getting ready to do something about them. There are a few spelling and grammatical errors and one sentence that doesn't make any sense ("They were leaning against idea number Two." I think you meant "They were leaning toward idea number Two."), but overall the fic is well-written and fun to read. I'm glad you overcame your writer's block, since I know I have another chapter ahead of me. I've experienced writer's block several times myself, and it sucks.
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 00:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(I'm reading this fic for the first time today, so I thought I would review the individual chapters as I read them.) I've seen the basic premise of Kagome getting killed in the final battle with Naraku and being revived before, but you did it in a slightly different way, which is nice. Your writing style is really enjoyable and I found the method of killing Kagome off (saving IY) moving. The only problem is that you use the word "lose" several times when you should use "loss." Just a little thing, but it bothered me a few times.
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Reviewed By: wtf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 02:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMNIT! I want to know what's going to happen.
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Reviewed By: living ember On: November 17, 2006 00:13 CST
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Oh man I hope Inuyasha talks to her at least. Or is he going to lose her to someone else for a while? That would be a good lesson for him.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad your writer's block is gone, chapter 3 is really good. Keep up the great work.
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Title: i didn't know what to name the title! tada!!
Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I NEED ANSWERS!! well. ..*sips tea* you left the 2nd chapter very vague, and leaving a big space with TONS of possibilities *sip* darn cliff hangers... hope the block goes away and lets the sun shine into your mind (does that make sense?) lol update soon! ^_~ p.s- very nice scene with kag's mom, most people can't catch her charater that well, nice work.
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 14:39 CST
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that was a really good chapter, and I can't wait for you to update again. I can understand writers block, so take your time. Until next time, ja ne!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 20:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Really,really great story. For someone with writer's block your good. I can't wait till your next update.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 10:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!! This is soo good. i like this better than your other ones! So what's gonna happen to Kags? UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: pilar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this so far, it drew me in. Will Kagura be revived? Many things are ledt unaswered and I can't wait for the answers.
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Peacefrog [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a natural! OMG! I can't wait to see where you are going to lead this story! I wanna know ahhh! Will kagome still be human? or will she be some kind of celestial being now that the shikon jewel is a part of her? how is she involved with sesshomaru?!??!?! OMG OMG! *hyperventalates* PLEASE.....WRITE....SOON TTFN
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Reviewed By: YukiTiOokami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i almost cried that was so good !
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