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| "Power In Many Forms" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: duelpersonality On: January 17, 2010 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to be honest; I came into this fic expecting suck, and I was thoroughly disappointed on that front. You're doing an amazing job of keeping all of the characters straight and in-character, not to mention how much fun it is to read this story. I'm a bit worried that if Neville gets many more cool little powers, he'll start edging into Gary Stu territory, but I fully expect that you can keep everything in balance. Love the story, I just hope you start updating a bit more (although I'm one to talk, considering my languishing fics...
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 23:23 CDT
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man, how many months has it been since an update? Still, this latest chapter isn't half bad, if a bit short. Still, that's what an interlude is, isn't it, a chapter to connect to different parts. So, gonna update again soon? Cause that would be appreciated. Update sooner rather than later next time, okay? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 08:15 CDT
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Heh, nice update, and fun to boot. Neh. Continue to update, will ya? These long waits are painful, but worth it, to a degree. Update again soon, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 17:16 CDT
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awww, but giving the fat fuckers trouble is 90% of a fun life! Heh. Seriously though, continue to update, will ya? The story rocks, and the meeting with Shiori-san should be fun (wonder if she ever met Hiei? she'd probably mother him close to insanity!) Heh. Continue to update, hopefully before the end of august. I'll write more then, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 22:56 CDT
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Heh, cute. Neh, like the latest chapter, now I'm wondering when the next one will come out. So, update? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 13:37 CDT
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Heh, energetic bastard. Heh. Continue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 20:54 CST
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Huh, cute. Too bad it took so long to update the story though. Oh well, not a bad way to continue it, but update again soon, okay? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: spitfire17268 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 00:22 CDT
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I LOVE your story and hope that you soon. I like the idea of Neville being half demon and hope that he is the hero in your story.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 02:55 CDT
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It's awesome to see another update so soon. NEh, the question I had earlier, is Anita related to Neville in here? I mean, you refer to her the way you do, I'd almost think maybe Anita's his grandmother or something. It would make an odd kind of sense (demon blooded, that could make her resistant as hell to vampire powers, and chimeras like Kurouno do have some power over the dead after all) and would make for an interesting part of this story later on. Neh, I gotta get going, I need some more sleep. Later
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE, THIS STORY ROCKS!!! Now if only it weren't months between updates, lol. Heh, enough of the joking around. I love the style, length and creative elements of each of the chapters thus far, though I am rather annoyed that you have so FEW chapters out so far. However, it is a cool story. I also like the possible relationship you've already foreshadowed (I mean hey, people get possessive in three way relationships, but one is from the books, the other partner would be sorta cute in a way) and the Hiei-Botan-Kuwabara Relationship is just awesome. Anyway, I like this story a lot, and I want to encourage you to write more of it more often. Please do so. Later
| Reviewed By: Silvermist1982 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 17:17 CST
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I like the premise of this story, I hope you update soon
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