Title: ^.^ Reviewed By: InuYasha_Hentai_Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 14:12 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I liked it. Very creative, I think. You should concentrate on your gammar, and puncutation. Other than that, it's a good start. Keep writing! ~Sagokiyo
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