| "Third Quarter Waxing" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 10:36 CST
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Seriously, that's one hell of a good story. Why did you stop writing it? I mean, no update in about 14 months can't really be called taking a break... truly sad. Hoping for a new chapter anyways xD
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Title: WRITE WRITE PLEASE
Reviewed By: Seyron On: July 13, 2007 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry up and write CARNAL LUVV already PLEASE , your wrting is so good ! (better than most other) please write more (A)
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Reviewed By: The Ansem Man [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 12:21 CDT
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Oh ho... This is where the other part of this fanfic has gone. I truly want to see this thing's conclusion, despite the fact you haven't touched it for several months now. I'll have my eyes on it to be sure.
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Reviewed By: Nana The Dwarf On: March 19, 2007 05:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good, why haven't you updated? I'm aching for more! :#
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Title: Im lovin it 8D parapa~pa~pa~
Reviewed By: Rutee On: February 01, 2007 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
- I must say that this fic is on my topnotch konosetsu list ^^ anyway I have left a review on ffnet .... then suddenly realized in here I also can drop a review lol~~but it doesnt hurt to review again dark sechan = hot ^^ and I dunno why but I feel that she's incredibly sexy durin the restaurant part.. though I hope no one will ever bring me to that type of restaurant pls updates soon ^^ dont let this fic go to waste -Al
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Title: update
Reviewed By: yashan-kun On: January 07, 2007 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please review, my anxiety and desire to see what happenes after this lovely date is killing me! secchan finally being the dominat one is turning me on. i must know if konochan will succeed at not having her way with herself. so please...onegai
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Reviewed By: C. On: December 27, 2006 11:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story; it certainly is one of the best I've read. I hope you update soon, I like your creativity and style of writing. This knew Setsuna surely is impressive. I like the plot and hope that you don't abandon this fic. The restaurant part was cool. No masturbating?!
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 22:08 CST
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hm.... i guess this is a good story.... i don't know, i have favorites in the konoset catagory.... but it's still a good story, that has a lot of potential.... don't let it go to waste.... too many story writers have done that.... i can think of five, right off the top of my head.....
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Reviewed By: yashan-kun On: November 21, 2006 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i love this really agressive secchan. i cant wait to c how u r gonna have konoka seducce secchan.keep up the good work.(loyal ff.net)
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Reviewed By: xSojix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 06:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad... I loke Ch3... Interesting plot... Good flow... But i feel it's slightly rushed... Nonetheless, great job.. And update soon!
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Title: Yay! u updated!!!
Reviewed By: DarkRai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaah yay! a cookie XD hey..how come this isnt on Fanfiction dot net anymore? either way, awww... i still love this..the resterant part was gross..yet.. seemed almost realistic in a way ><
ah-hah... Konoka got owned >< i guess i would understand y she doesnt even wanna bother being the agressive one anymore u should so continue, cant wait till the next moon T___T [LOL no masturbating?? torture for Konoka-san] ~DarkRai [loyally from ff.net]
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