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| "Live Well" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: MORE!!
Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 20:25 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this. You took Raditz's manhood, you fiend. I like the way you write Kaka. She's like an egdy version of Goku. Your right about the upbringing thing, but they are still the same person DNA wise. Well, there is that whole X vs. Y chromosome thing. I just can't wait for your next update. Kaka as a girl is funny as all hell. She does seem to be taking to the whole "now married to the Prince" thing a little to well. It makes her seem a bit Mary Sue-ish. I know it may be part of the story, but whats up with all the weird reactions, like with that family meeting. Although royals are notible for needing to be turned on their heads every now and then. I do like the idea of Brolli flirting with Kaka. Although, the idea of Vegeta having the hots for his mother is a tad on the disturbing side. Anyway, all in all, I like it a bunch. Maybe you could put in more thought quotes or explain some of the reactions and weird bits unless it ruins the plot of course. E-mail me at ultistarmon@hotmail.com if you like.
| Title: chapters 1-6
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this is new, i was surprised to find in my inbox that you had a new fic up... and how many chapters you upload O_O ~ i really enjoyed reading this (as i do in many of your fics) and love the way kakarot stick up for herself in this. ~ i know you said that you want people to hate her (do you really??) buuut, i can't help but love her in your fics ^.^ ~ i hope your not too upset... or upset at all about that, heh ~ ok, hope this review wasn't as crappy as i think it is ^_^;; (did that make sense?) cya! ^-^
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