Title: Yaoi! (demonic laugh) Reviewed By: snowdeep On: May 14, 2008 19:15 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I loved your line that you put in. The one were Cairo(spelling?)slips in and Cerese(spelling?)turns over and asks if it is him then Cairo asks him what and he replies by saying "nothing just wanted to know if it was you." or something close to it. I was laughing so hard. I can image Cerese doing that. It was really intersing doing a full p.o.v. from Cairo. i got into Cantarella(spelling)just recently and loving every page of it. My favorite character is the Cairo and Luczeza(sigh.spelling)sorry if you haven't notice I'm spelling impaired. But good work write another chapter maybe this time in cerese's p.o.v. that would be awesome.
Title: Fabulous! Reviewed By:Kiwi Ninamori [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 21:56 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I absolutely loved it! It was super cute>.< oh how I wish you could write more fics since there is only one about Cantarelle. I think I will write one myself since no else but you will^_^ I enjoyed it so much though it was short.
