| "Leaf in the Desert" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 00:50 CDT
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PLease update soon. I LOVE teh way this is going! can u update by at least the Thursday? thanx.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 20:42 CST
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Me:I'm patient. Gaara: Patient my ass. Me: Shut up. No one asked you! Gaara: so? Me: *opens mouth, pauses. closes it cause i can't think of anything to say* Gaara:My point exactly.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 20:38 CST
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Awesome! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 20:27 CST
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Whoa...
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 20:17 CST
Comment/Review:
AWSOME!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 20:06 CST
Comment/Review:
SWEET!
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Title: HEY AGAIN!
Reviewed By: nejiten4ever!! On: February 01, 2007 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i happened to check up on everything and found that you updated! yeah! i glad u r still alive^.^! so yeah i just glad to hear u will be up dating and not leaving this great story and me and my 37 other friends -yes 37 friends most of whom i see in person everyday- are totally waiting for yor story to be updated. we will be waiting for you!! :D love your loyal fans and nejiten4ever!!
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Title: I LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewed By: nejiten4ever!! On: January 30, 2007 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found you!!! yah! i can't believe you wrote a sequel for flowers in the sand! i so happy i had issues with my computer so i must have missed it and it seems you have not written for over a month. what the hell i want to see some up dating... please i'd be upset if you dropped it and that is why i rated 9 as an overall rating. but as always i will praise you for awesome writing^.^ and as always like with your last story i will ask if you could add a little nejiXtenten in there... like do they have more children like everyone else? but you don't have to if it messes up you original plot. so do what ever! xD So again please update and i keep a watch for anything new . You loyal fan Nejiten4ever :D
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Hanna-Bi82 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i just have to say i sooooo love this story you have to keep writing this i have to see how it all turns out so please keep write i love this story and the other ones thank for your time tifa
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 19:45 CST
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I faved it before i read it. I read Flowers in the sand before, 2 times acutally. Neji got dumped! Gobi ended up Gaara (The name of Gobi's carrier escapes me...)any ways I LOVE it. Please DON'T CRUSH IT WITH DESERT FUNERAL (the other names are sand Burial,Desert burial etc.) KEEP THIS FIC GOING! HOORAY GAARA! yes I'm a Gaara fan. The guy's freakin Awsome! Hooray For Suna! *RUns away before people can try to shut me up*
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Reviewed By: snehpetsharas [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So good! your characters have personality and I feel like I can envision them while I read. It is tough to keep up with so many characters, but I have a feeling you will begin to concentrate on 3 or 4 main characters soon. Keep up the good work and the originality!
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Reviewed By: djohnson [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Staring off great already. It's great seeing how the children of the main cast are similar to their parents, yet still different. Naruto's son being a ramen eating ladies' man, Sasuke's son still being infatuated with power, but not to the extent that Sasuke was, it's good stuff. Can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: Cloud Dancer On: December 09, 2006 07:30 CST
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So how did Sasami meeat Sasuke?
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Reviewed By: WanderingSoul On: November 11, 2006 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. Just out of curiousity, are you going to include any other Jinchūriki in this story?
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Title: WOW!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ghost07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 23:04 CST
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THAT WAS GREAT! I like the time jump, was it about 7 years? I REALLY hope to get to see more of this one. BTW...Who was Sho, did i miss him/her in the last story?
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