| "Leaf in the Desert" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: narufreak1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 22:44 CST
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I really love your story. I am sorry if I spell things wrong because the last chapters made me cry . It was really sad but at the same time happy. :')
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Reviewed By: ghost07 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 17:26 CDT
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Thank you for the updates. Your story keeps getting better and better. Thank you for the info about Lee's death, and I liked Gaara's take on it. The reactions from papa Haru and his family were priceless, and I can't wait to see the family together for the first time. Anyway, I can't wait for you next update, please make it soon.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: ghost07 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 21:33 CDT
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That was some fast updating. The chapters were great, especially the escape/rescue mission. Gin and Haru as parents, this looks like it woo be fun. Can't wait to see how Haru's parents react. Now on to the more somber, you have had a lot of death so far. Lee, Choji. Tenten, Hinata, and Mimi, with more to be anounced later i bet. Would you please give us a clue as to how Lee and Tenten died, maybe in a flahback? Oh yeah, what ever happend to Itachi's daughter(her names escapes me at the moment)? Hm...guess i'm feeling long winded today. Anyway, can't wait for your next update. Please make it as soon as possible.
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Title: YAYayayayayaya!!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 20:11 CDT
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I've been reading this for a long time and I never commented for some reason...I also read Flowers in the Sand but never commented either...ANYWAY, You updated fast as hell. THANK YOU!! I really hope Kohaku and Aiko make it out of there alive. Hurt, but alive (hurt makes the story cool). And Haru better live too. Hurt, but alive. GAARA BETTER LIVE TOO!!!!
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Reviewed By: Amaya of the night On: August 01, 2007 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dances around a fire and chants..* Long Live the amber dragonfly!! dont forget to update soon with the great stories!!
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Reviewed By: Himeno 123 On: August 01, 2007 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is AWESOME!!! I think its cute that our little ninjas are all grown up and have kids of their own, even Sasuke!! that one really surprised me! That's what i love about your stories they keep me guessing like,"Flowers in the Sand". But please,please,please try to get out the next part soon! I practically live off this stuff! Keep up the incredible writing!!
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Reviewed By: Haruko Yurii On: August 01, 2007 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U R an awesome writer!! I read & loved "Flowers in the Sand". Once i heard there was "Leaf in the Desert i just HAD to read it! the story is great so far, i got a lil confused with all the kids though, but as the story goes on I'm sure I'll get the hang of things!^^ I know your busy and all but please try to get the next chapter soon. thank you. :)
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Reviewed By: ghost07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 20:58 CDT
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It took a long time to get, but it was well worth the wait!!!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you. I have been waiting to see Kohaku get flattened. I like all the romancing that is going on between the kids, it's great. I love what you did with Gin, genjutsu is awsome. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving this. Great to know what the kids are doing. Hmmm, I'm thinking we are going to see a very irate Gaara, or a very irate Aiko with a sand sledghammer. LOL Loving that mental image.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous1028 On: April 23, 2007 15:18 CDT
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Wow, it's been a really,really long time since you've updated.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous1028 On: March 20, 2007 17:12 CDT
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I also agree with Gaara Freak. Kohaku has got to be flattened with sand by either Aikou or Gaara.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous1028 On: March 20, 2007 17:05 CDT
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AWESOME! You have got to update! By the way, when did Gaara learn schmoozing?
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Title: OH MY GOSH
Reviewed By: nejiten4ever!! On: March 19, 2007 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH. EEEEEHHH!!!! that was awesome, like really awesome. can't wait for the next chapter! Kin and Gin they are neji and tenten's kids right, i just wanted to make sure! Oh and did you know that 'Kin' means 'forbidden'? what does Gin mean then. Anyone know?
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Title: Welcom back
Reviewed By: ghost07 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 20:24 CDT
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Wow, no rust to shake off. That was a wonderful chapter. I agree with Gaara Freak....I hope she flattens him!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 09:08 CDT
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I hope she beats him. Or Gaara beats him. Which ever happens first.
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