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| "Hiding in Plain Sight" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Blackrosebunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Cool, flashy Jutsu...." Man that was funny to me for some reason... XD I even had my friend laughing. This is one of the few Bleach/Naruto Crossovers that I really like. I really do hope you update and soon!
| Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 16:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Same. I wish you would continue this
| Title: Good Story
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 21:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the story overall. I wish there were more chapters though and that's all I got to say.
| Reviewed By: AKACHAN CHUX [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKE THE PLOT SO FAR. KEEP GOING, IT'S INTRESTING^_^
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 08:01 CST
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Hmmm, if you did a holiday fic, also make sure he gets one from Anko, and another from a 'mysterious friend', AKA Youri-chan and company. Anyway, onto more important things, the fic is a good idea, really, not joking. Still, Bleach/Naruto crossovers, while becoming more prominent, are a cool idea (I've seen one for the 3rd becoming a captain in the gotei 13, it is cool, even if not updated as often as I'd want. Anyway, beyond that, biggest peice of advise I want to give, have Kakkashi be involved in in Naruto's early life, or Jiraia, as the perverts to never become, as Anko will violently remind naruto, using physical examples. I think the idea would be a good comedy chapter. Anyway, keep writing, updating, and maintain that precious, precious sanity, we all need to keep it up during this time fo college exams, high school paper insanity, and the pre-christmas insanity of getting work done before leaving for the holidays. Good luck, and goo dtimes be had by ya all, later.
| Reviewed By: IchiNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 22:19 CST
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Hey man good job keep up the good work. Oh hey I just had an idea make a chapter on Christmas next month like how depressing it is for Naruto when he sees all the other kids get presents while he might buy one for himself and get one from The Third. Again great job hope to see more soon but with school and all you might not have much time.
| Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm thinking tat Naruto startes the academy three years before sasuke becuase it is said that Naruto has failed the acadmey three times.
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