| "Sailor Moon H Legend of the moon shinobi" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Split On: November 08, 2007 16:56 CST
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Split up your paragraphs. Some of them are way too long which makes it difficult for people to read.
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Reviewed By: Sukrai On: October 27, 2007 19:58 CDT
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Yes, you should link part 2 to this story... or at least leave an author's note after the last chapter pointing to it. I like how you made Usagi the one who convinced Naruto to go back, that was something that both she would do and yet you don't expect it! Good job!
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Title: Supremely awesome
Reviewed By: lord fox On: October 10, 2007 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would first like to say great story so far keep up the good work. I think you should make the sequel part of this story. I also noticed a little Kakashi and Setsuna in one of your chapters I think that's great I hope we see more. Also in the sequel will you have the demon break free from the seal? I just curious because I've heard that supposedly that the seal was weakening by the time Naruto was that age. I think it should break I think it would awesome to watch the sailor scout's fight the demon. Also well Gaara and his demon played to grow in the sequel? Also will small lady play a role in the sequel. I hope so I would like to see her reaction to her uncle. Also in the chapter were Naruto was tempted to the darkness I think you could go back there if you wanted to and split the story and do a what if Naruto became evil. And in the sequel maybe you could get Hinata together Naruto along with Hotaru. I think Naruto could use all the love he can get plus no ones better for Hinata then Naruto but this is just a suggestion to add more intrigue. I can also see a little bit of Ami Naru action going on I like that as well. One more question will the sailor stars along with the other sailor Scouts from the last series sailor stars make an appearance?
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Title: About the sequel
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 19:43 CDT
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Yes I am going to writte a sequel but I dont know if I shoud included in this story or should I do it separately so please I need your opinion on this but there is no doubt that there is going to be a sequel so please send your review for your opinion thank you.
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Reviewed By: Sukrai On: October 09, 2007 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The end? THE END!?!?!?!? You still have an entire arc to do yet!!!! You can't just leave us hanging! What about the senshi coming to Konoha? You KNOW that Orochimaru had enough time to deduce a way to synthesize the Guinzuishou, so why pull our leg with this 'last chapter' stuff?! Pleeeeeeeeease don't end it yet!
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Reviewed By: Fox storm On: October 02, 2007 20:42 CDT
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I love this. I hope there is a part 2 Also I hope Naruto and Hotaru stay together.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story
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Reviewed By: scione [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW THis story is one of the top tens i read it very very good
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Reviewed By: scione [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yep i all ways knowed that Naruto and Hotaru would rock together keep up the fine job
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Reviewed By: scione [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chapter i loved the atk very good name lol.
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Reviewed By: scione [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story it a very good sm/naruto crossover
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 23:09 CDT
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That was ok and I am sorry about the last review its just when anybody writes a story that has fighting I usually skip through it only if they make the fight seem like it will never and I mean never end because when I read something like that I start to get bored so I am sorry for that review
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 02:23 CDT
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Not bad I hate to say it but I am sorry with your last update hell I had to skip through it because I started to get bored with it bored hell I just about fell asleep reading it because that fight between Kakashi and Kisame just went on and on and on and on I am like damn this is just gtting broing when will it be over and now I am wondering I thought more of Naruto`s friends are comming but then I remember you said there will be some more of characters from Naruto so I take it they are Kisame and that GAY ass Itachi oh well please update soon
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Reviewed By: Mad6231 On: June 28, 2007 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done a great job at keeping the story interesting all the way up til now. I just have one thing to comment on. Please take the time to proof read your stories before posting them. I keep finding lots of simple spelling errors. I'd offer to proofread them for you but I don't get on the internet often enough for that I'm afraid.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 11:17 CDT
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That was a nice ending but now I am wondering will Tsunade will she be sending anybody else to help them since she knows the Akatsuki are strong and she knows there after Naruto I was just wondering it would be kinda cool if some more of Naruto`s frends show up to help but thats just my opinion anyways please update soon
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