| "Sailor Moon H Legend of the moon shinobi" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Title: HELP
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 10:27 CDT
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I need help I can't upload chapters when I'm going to upload the chapter the screen has a message that reads ERROR not supported file format I have Microsfot Word 2007 I dont know what the message means is there someone who can help me with this because if it keeps up I won't be able to upload any further chapters from my stories.
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 12:20 CDT
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i liked it and Mari-naruto taking chibi-usa's broach caught me blind sided but i can understand the reasonings behind it. i wonder if there is going to be any romance between Setsuena and Kakishi-sensei. you said there is a connection between sauske, sakura and the scouts right? what if they are related...though that seems like it would be a bit overdone now that i think about it...but continue with the good work cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 11:41 CDT
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is it just me or did the chappie get longer? anywho, hokage-sama i doubt is going to be very happy about this and i dont think she will believe him when he comes back that he was taken by force..and i have a feeling alot of agnst is going to ensue. please update soon...please please please and one thing YO JOE
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Title: About the senshis?
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 00:29 CDT
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No the senshis ARE NOT coming you will have to keep reading the story and I wont say anything about Chibi Usa transforming I dont want to say any spoilers sorry.
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 00:38 CDT
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omg i loved it...please update soon i think the scouts are on their way and pervy-sage is gonna have a field day with them amd will chibiusa transform here?
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Reviewed By: princessofdobermans(nsi) On: May 14, 2008 23:13 CDT
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i love it please update soon, you still need some work with proper quote usage and paragraphs, spelling and proper grammar but you are making a dramatic improvement from start to where you are now . and a little advice when you use Chan, Kun, san, sama(lord/lady) use the - with is, and Koi(girlfriend) and Koshi(boyfriend), father is Otou-san, Otou-chan(daddy), ka-chan(momma), Okka-san(mother), Oba-san(grandma), Obaa-san(aunt). so there is a few more words and meanings for you for some of the words you use a lot in English but with the theme you are going with switch it to Japanese and dong forget the space then the -. i hope you update soon Dobie
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Reviewed By: princessofdobermans(nsi) On: May 14, 2008 23:13 CDT
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i love it please update soon, you still need some work with proper quote usage and paragraphs, spelling and proper grammar but you are making a dramatic improvement from start to where you are now . and a little advice when you use Chan, Kun, san, sama(lord/lady) use the - with is, and Koi(girlfriend) and Koshi(boyfriend), father is Otou-san, Otou-chan(daddy), ka-chan(momma), Okka-san(mother), Oba-san(grandma), Obaa-san(aunt). so there is a few more words and meanings for you for some of the words you use a lot in English but with the theme you are going with switch it to Japanese and dong forget the space then the -. i hope you update soon Dobie
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!
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Reviewed By: dragoonvixenofshadows [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 15:37 CDT
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please use quotation marks in the story so we readers know when the charicters are speaking. and indent when a person does start to speak and for a new person speaking, so we know who and when the dialogue belongs and when it started, other than that its really good so far. right now im on chapter 2 and the quote thing was really annoying me. vixen
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Title: About the next chapter
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 14:53 CST
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Al right people Im a little undecided about writting the next chapter I have been thinking in making the chunin exams I might write a three part saga BUT I also have been thinking in skipping the chunin exams and beginning with the first time skip of the story I don't know what to do I need your opinions.
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Title: Dango!
Reviewed By: Sukrai On: January 18, 2008 17:02 CST
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The name of the food is Dango! Dango with Red Bean sauce! And usually she has sake or tea with it, depending on if she's on duty or with company...
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 08:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter
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Title: MERRY CHRISTMAS
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 23:39 CST
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All I have to say is.......MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL OF YOU AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR and dont worry I will continue writting fan fics so believe it.
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