| "Sailor Moon H Legend of the moon shinobi" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Forse On: June 21, 2007 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I've been reading this fan fic for a while and i have to say that i've taken a liking towards it. Other than spelling and format its ideas are quite good. Sometimes i find character behaviour unexpected but again you make this quite interesting. You asked what abilities sasuke gained in the manga. Well, he now is able to extend his chidori in the form of a blade up to five meters, his is practically the one of the fastest characters able to jump off a cliff and appear next to naruto without being noticed and in the span of under a second, he is completely cold hearted, his sharingan has evolved to the level where its able to suppress the chakra of the kyuubi and project him to Naruto's mind, his fighting skills surpassed orochimaru's at his age which is seen when he manages to take down a whole army of sound nin without a scratch and without having to kill anyone, his has increased his sword-fighting skills, his is almost in total control of the curse seal able to activate it only in some parts of his body, a new attack 'chidori current' which circulates the chidory around his body to create a barrier of electricity around him that acts as a shield and paralyzes anyone that touches it and is able to apply it to his sword (that is a very powerful copy of Orochimaru's one.) making it able to cut thru metal with ease. Also Naruto does have a new attack as well called Fuuton: Rasen-Shuriken which is a one hit OK attack no matter who you are. Also he reached the four tailed level of the Kyuubi in which he looses all control in his body becoming a miniature kyuubi. As well as that he learned a very good learning technique from Kakashi who has developed the mengekyu sharingan or a variation of it. If you want to check out all of the naruto comics i would suggest that you either watch them in saiyanisland.com or onemanga.com and if you don't see everything or something that you missed simply search for the chapters from youtube.com, a user called grandhalo has every one of the shippuden comics in great quality and posted them in youtube.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 00:47 CDT
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Cool you actually put that in hell I doubt that you would well I guess I was wrong so are you going to have the others notice the scar and ask him about it and will he tell them what actually happen or will he tell wat he told Hotaru that he got it in a fight if he tells them what he told Hotaru that is ok oh well please update soon but then again they aren`t that dumb so they would probably keep asking him what happened and how he got it
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Reviewed By: Mad6231 On: June 19, 2007 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You mentioned having someone inform you about some of the ablities Sasuke has shown later in the series and I'm replying to that. One of Sasuke's new techniques is the "One Thousand Birds Current" which projects lightning chakra similar to "Chidori" throughout his body, attacking anyone near him while acting as a shield at the same time. Another ablity he has is to project lightning chakra along his blade, increasing it's sharpness and giving it the ablity to paralyze anyone who gets hit with it. Sasuke also has more control over his curse seal to the extent where he can completely transform only certain parts of his body.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 14:37 CDT
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I`m not sure if you actually read your reviews if you do I was just wondering are you going to give Naruto the SCAR that Sasuke gave him the one where Sasuke put his whole hand through Naruto`s chest meaning that Naruto would have a scar on his chest and his back I hope you do because I would love to see what everybodies reacting when they see it thats if you have him take his sweat shirt off PLEASE PUT THAT IN YOUR STORY PLEASE but I doubt it and what about Kakashi isn`t he still there watching out for them why couldn`t you have him there as well I know the girls would love to see him there ok well one last time I AM BEGGING YOU TO HAVE IT THAT NARUTO HAS THAT SCAR and have them explain to them why he has it PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: mad6231 On: June 17, 2007 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work! The storyline is very creative as is the pairing with Naruto. One question I have is are you going to have Naruto or Sasuke use any of the techniques that they learned during the 3-year gap in the Naruto universe?
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 08:08 CDT
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I Love The Chapter:26!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 13:13 CDT
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So far this chapter is pretty good I loved the part where Kakashi looked at sailor and friends well looking at there outfits and thinking that Jiraiya would go nuts lol oh yeah and tat Basilsk youmas I might be mistaken but isn`t the Basilsk a snake creature that turns ppl into stone by I think spitting on them oh well please update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 12:36 CDT
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LOL so your not going to say if there will be anymore of Naruto`s friends comming to help so what you are saying there won`t be anybody else but by saying you have to read on meaning you just want me to ead knowing that none of Naruto`s friends are going to help him thats cool you could of just said no
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 12:27 CDT
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I Love The Story!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 01:49 CDT
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Cool Kakashi is back cool I cann`t wait for the very very small part of the next chapter you should have more of Naruto`s friends come and help like Neji, Tenten and Lee or maybe Kiba, Hinata and Shino with there teacher Kurenai that would be cool no Hinata wouldn`t be good since she likes Naruto and if she finds out Naruto loves Hotaru she wold be heart broken oh well I still say sent more of his friends to help out
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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So far for this chapter I like it I guess thats all so please update soon
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Title: hm
Reviewed By: RubiFelton On: June 06, 2007 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm.. your story has an interestinf plot but i'm having trouble reading it. With your story you have to make a new paragraph every time some one talks and put " " before and after some one talks. plus it wouldn't hurt to put a little more detail. BUT you do have a good story idea XD
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: RubyFelton On: May 30, 2007 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good idea for a fic there's only a slight problem. It gets a little confusing for who's saying what so you need to make a new paragraph for each time some one says something and you need to put " " before and after someone talks. Example: "Naruto where the heck are you?" yelled sasuke. "I'm over here dummy," replied Naruto. Like that. but overall I like this story. XD
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 20:43 CDT
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Those two chapters were really good the cool thing is I had something to read while hoping these other damn authors would get off there asses and update there stories it is so so boring when they don`t update and there isn`t anything to read oh well please update soon
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