| "Sailor Moon H Legend of the moon shinobi" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Title: hm
Reviewed By: RubiFelton On: June 06, 2007 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm.. your story has an interestinf plot but i'm having trouble reading it. With your story you have to make a new paragraph every time some one talks and put " " before and after some one talks. plus it wouldn't hurt to put a little more detail. BUT you do have a good story idea XD
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: RubyFelton On: May 30, 2007 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good idea for a fic there's only a slight problem. It gets a little confusing for who's saying what so you need to make a new paragraph for each time some one says something and you need to put " " before and after someone talks. Example: "Naruto where the heck are you?" yelled sasuke. "I'm over here dummy," replied Naruto. Like that. but overall I like this story. XD
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 20:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Those two chapters were really good the cool thing is I had something to read while hoping these other damn authors would get off there asses and update there stories it is so so boring when they don`t update and there isn`t anything to read oh well please update soon
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:21 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked that chapter it was finally long and I don`t care if it ended in a cliffhanger because it was good kind sucked about Kakashi seems to me kinda weak there but anyways it was still good and long I like that so take your time and update with another good chapter
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:20 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 07:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:19 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 01:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well that was a very short start for this chapter oh well I guess I will just have to wait heck I will just wait until I see you had updated atleast three more times before I read it so that I am not wasting time only reading a short part then have to wait yet again oh well keep up the good work and please update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 13:43 CDT
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That was a cool chapter and it is cool that next chapter they find out abot Naruto`s past but what would really be cool would be having Kakashi come back for good like you said he would but never happened please bring Kakashi back it won`t be a good Naruto story if Kakashi isn`t in it oh well please update soon please
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 06:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please use quotation marks. It is exceedingly difficult to read without proper punctuation.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:18 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:17!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 02:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok well the start was ok I guess oh well so when will Kakashi come back and when or if he does will he actually stay with them or will he just tell them couple of things and then leave again I just hope you have him stay with them for the rest of your story but I kinda doubt that oh well just update soon please
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 14:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
More clues to Naruto`s dream oooook so after this clue are they going to forget it and then yor going to have yet another little clue 3 chapters later oh well I guess the story is ok I have been tring to force myself to stay awake while reading it
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 16:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree I am also dying to know what Naruto`s dream is about you haven`t said anything about it for a long time and when you do its not much and I remember one part when Naruto talked about his dream both Luna and Artemis those cats they both said there going to keep an eyes on him but after that you had them do everything but keeping an eye on him so did they just forget about it ad what about Naruto does he still have the dreams or did they just stop I wnt to know oh well sorry to ask to much just update if you can
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