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| "The gap between ages" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Zyadai On: January 15, 2013 13:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy the story! I think the idea is wonderful and original. I especially like how you managed to connect the two worlds, having one be the past, rather than simply having it be an alternate world. Maybe Robin will learn awesome cool firebending too! I mean, what she does must look impressive to them considering she doesn't need to move her body to do it, but the attacks the benders have are a lot more offensive than pretty much anything she does. But of course, her fire is infinitely hotter, considering she can completely incinerate people and objects, whereas no vendetta can manage THAT. Nor so they seem to have the defensive abilities or fine control over fire that she shows. I'd love to see more of the interaction between her and other firebenders. I mean, though an Avatar, Aang is still considered an air-bender, so I would assume she would be classified as a fire-bender. And cannot wait to see Zuko come in! Him and Anon are quite similar; they will either clash spectacularly or become best buds. ((Both of Aang AND Robin need him, since her style is not really suited to the type of fighting they are dealing with, so I just assumed he would be coming in eventually)). Anyway, sorry for that bit of a rant. I truly enjoyed the story and hope that my review spurs you to continue writing the story! | Title: more
Reviewed By: needaname On: January 05, 2008 04:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope someday soon you right more. I've been checking and hoping to see the updated version. I want to find out what happens.
| Reviewed By: maia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 23:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! this story is so much fun! u shuld continue dis story 2oo, no matter what! i want 2 know more wat will happen in dis story. R Amon & Robin going 2 b 2gether in the end? wat about Aang & Katara? is dere going 2 b a lemon in the story? giv us some more details, man! WE WANT 2 KNOW MORE!
| Title: nice job
Reviewed By: 12575310 On: December 17, 2006 18:11 EST
Comment/Review:
No dont stop this is quite good
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