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| "Cobalt Skies and Too Blue Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] | Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: ysiao On: March 14, 2009 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! I've read and reread this story so many times! It's still one of your best work I think. Sango is absolutely my favorite character. You did well.
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 12:14 CDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashaloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Reviewed By: Thornwitch1 On: June 01, 2008 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I think this is the only well-written Ban/San pairing I've read... It's quite good, though its starting to be annoying how Sango always seems to be sick or in a state of emotional collapse. Ater all, this is a woman who clawed her way out of her own grave pretty much on strength of will alone...
| Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 19:57 CDT
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I knew the wait would pay off! Loving your naughty muse! Sango's not OCC..she just thawed out with Bank's presence (what woman wouldn't). Thanks for the field lemon! And agree with your FMM assessment 100%
| Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just discovered this beautiful story and am sorry to see that it's been abandoned. Why? I'm normally a Sess/Kag fan but something about the summary and pairing caught my interest. I'm glad I read it. The plot is very original. I like how you used the equinox to bring back Bankotsu. He was such a violent figure and to show this side of him is heartwarming. You bring out their raw emotions and silent sufferings with such talent as a writer. I don't think you abandoned this story through boredom, but for another reason. Please return and finish it. It deserves a finish. For one thing, you've turned me into a Bankotsu fan. I've always liked Sango being paired with someone besides Miroku. I don't dislike him, just that I get tired of them always being paired. I plan to check on this story from time to time just in case you decide to update it.
| Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey its been a while huh? I know how hard it is to get the ideas down grammatically correct and all. I am so glad you didn't abandon us your loyal readers. I loved the comical parts in this chapter and look forward to more.
| Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way the story is developing. All to often us writers rush a story. I am enjoying this more then most and I give you kudos for such a wonderful story.
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story! I really like this pairing. It really isn't TOO farfetched. Both of the are warriors, after all. Of course, Bankotsu WAS a type of serial killer.....so maybe they aren't THAT similar. But this is still a good pairing, LOL. The way you took Miroku out of the equation was brilliant, and I relly like that you are letting Sango truly go throught the grief process, instead of just throwing she and Bankotsu together. All of this emotion gives the two of them the opportunity to build a real relationship, so I really like your pacing. Only thing is....it's been an awfully long time since Kagome or Inuyasha checked on Sango. Since they were so concerned about her living on her own with just her son, it seems like an awfully long time has passed without somebody checking on her. I know Kagome has apparently just had her own baby not too long ago. But I would still think that at least Inuyasha would take a day trip to check on her after that hard winter. And, honestly, I just can't wait until Inuyasha and Bankotsu meet up. That is going to be an interesting (and fun) confrontation, I'm quite sure. I just hope that Kagome is around to rein Inuyasha in somewhat, LOL. Anyway, I realize this is an insanely long review, so I'm shutting up now ^__^ . I am definitely enjoying your story, and I hope to read more soon.
| Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 23:41 CDT
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Still loving this story. it's really heartbreaking for Sango, and i feel so sad for her. Glad for the updates, and can't wait for more :)
| Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really like this story. althoug it makes me ache with sadness for Sango, it looks like it will end up to be a happy ending (a big thing for me - I dont really do the whole unhappy ending thing too well). But the reason I like it so much is because it is simply so fresh. I have never seen another story like this even remotley, and while that may be simply because I haven't, not because they aren't out there, I doubt it. I think that your story is really original, and I definatly can't wait for more!
| Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 09:17 CDT
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Well, I was worried you had left me hanging. Thank you so much for the update. I hope all is well on your end.
| Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me he is staying around for a while. I would hate for poor Sango to come to and see that her 'lover/babyfather' is gone.
| Reviewed By: Julie87 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 11:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Now, normally I don't care for alternate pairings, but this one is quite refreshing and so is the plot line. You have a very descriptive and eloquent writing style, but I could care less for character digs like the girl was "passably pretty" just b/c you feel that Sango doesn't get enough attention in the fanfic realm. Yes, I know it's Bankotsu pov and all, but I've seen this pattern in your other fics, particularly the Kouga/Sango pairing ones. And let me make this perfectly clear, I do adore Sango and think she is a wonderful/beautiful/strong/intelligent (and any other positive trait-descriptive adjectives you can come up with) character. But I don't think you need to rip down another character or make her seem any less worthy/intelligent/beautiful, etc... to get your point across. We get that Banks is intrigued by the beautiful demon slayer as you've done a fine and nicely lemon-filled job of showing us. But please, demonstrating Kagome as Sango's equal (perhaps not in slayer training but in other respects) doesn't detract from Sango's character in any way. Sorry, but I just had to put my two cents in.
| Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As a fan of yours and of alternate pairings I thank you for giving us readers something fresh and new. As much as I like the tradional Kag/Inu and San/Mir it gets kind of old and boring. This is a nice reminder that in fanfic anything goes. So is the baby really Miroku's??? Is it a reincarnation of Bankotsu??
| Reviewed By: Kera-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
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Sango and BANKO-BAKA?! EW! YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME! First of he's dead - second off she's in love with Miroku - and third that made utterly no sense what so ever. Stop tampering with Takahashi-sama's work, non-canon lover person ;b
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