| "Awakening of Fires" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 08:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love how you can keep the readers in suspense. As you continue to update, the story is defiantly beginning to get better! I am really looking forward to reading more as you left me hanging on the edge of my seat with ideas and thoughts about what will happen next!! Another great chapter-I really enjoyed this one.
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 01:27 CDT
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I just found you fic and it is very interesting. Nothing I've seen done before. I hope Kagome and Miroku get caught. I wouldn't want to see it followed through. Please update soon.
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Title: More
Reviewed By: Dark Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 07:04 CDT
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This is fantastic. Even if you only have 5 reveiw I think the rest will come in time. I mean probably hundreds of people are reading this right now and loving it but are too lazy to reviw (like me). the only reason I reveiw to some stories is because I wanna show my support or just because I love it and I beleive this storie falls into both catogories. Good on ya, update soon please or at least within the year.
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 09:33 CDT
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Now that was a cliffhanger! Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah u finally updated!!! Great chap!!!!
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Reviewed By: etaotn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 06:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fanfic, but it is a little bit confusing. I love your writing style but you should explain better what it is around the characters. The scenes change too quickly without explanation. These factors let the reader to fail enjoying the story. I hope you don't consider me a flame, because I think you have great potentialities.
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, what a wonderful beginning. I do hope you intend to continue? I look forward to more updates if so!
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great fic!!!update soon...plz!!!
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