| "Disease" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: I wish you could continue the story..*sob*
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this and its a realy good story but is that realy the end?? What happened with the factory? Are they ever going to catch Robin?.....You finish what seemed like only half the story and Keiko is a Witch huter I'm guessing and the fact that she knows Robin wouldn't they have found her....I wish you hadent ended the story there....*sob*............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks happy* Oh that was great. I love the end, and how Hiei and Inu Yasha got that demon. I did love the last two chapters. I really liked this wholle mini-saga of yours and can't wait to see what you're next story is going to be like. Well untill next time. SMILES ^_~
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: May 17, 2007 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for not reviewing sonner, I've been busy. I love it. I'm shocked that Kurama's step dad and brother didn't piss themselves in fright of Hiei. Oh did you look up Serena's last name? and if you did where'd you find it? I loved the last 5 chapters. Poor Kagome, does her being sick have to do with the demon that Hiei and the others are after? Will Serena and Hiei get together? Will Kurama's heart ever mend and be whole again? Will the STN-J find out about Serena and go looking for her and find Robin as well? Well can't wait for the next chapter. SMILE ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 17:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is awesome, can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: March 27, 2007 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I just finished readingthe last 5 chapters and I have to say... THEY'RE GREAT. I bet the 2 people Hiei just met are Kurama's step-dad and step-brother. Yes, Ayema, you knew who I was talking about even if I forgot her name. Oh poor Kagome, I hope she's ok. WHAT isn't Gotenmaru one of Naraku's "children"? That big purple, ugly, horned demon that Inu Yasha killed the first time his demon blood kicked in after his sword was broken? 3 Pups for Kouga and Ayema, how cute. Oh I can't wait to read the next chapter. Oh and I don't have the pasents of a sanit, just the will to wait for your next chapter to see what you've come up with nexted. I know how to wait for things, seeing as with you're story it's WEELLLL wroth the wait. WEll untill next time.... SMILES ^_~
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: February 24, 2007 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, I feel sorry for Kagome. So what is Kouga going to do when he sees Kagome and the others again? And what about the female wolf? Yes I forgot her name. Sango's son is just like he's father, finds a female and lays under his blankets, poor Sango is going to have her hands full when he and his sister grow up. Thanks for the e-mail addy, I added you to my addresses. So what's next? SMILE ^_~
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Reviewed By: Millicent_Hellix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im in love with this story! Whats Hieies feelings for Kagome? Wheres Inuyasha gone? Please dont tell me if he went to Kikyou!?!? dude if he did...make it an Hiei/Kag :P thatd be awsome! be I still like an Inuyasha/Kagome thing...but anyways, I really like the story! Plkease update!
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: January 11, 2007 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved it. What's up with Kagome? is she just tired or is it something else something to do with the jewel? If Kira gets in there faces again about the twins I thin that she should be put in her place. She has no right to do that, and they's nothing wrong with any chikd growing up around different beings, no matter who or what they are. I know how crazy it gets with the holidays, so it's no biggy. Ok my e-mail is serenamoonlight2002@yahoo.com, I'm not sure where yours is. If you do ever e-mail me please tell me who you are in the heading ok. If you keep going then I look forword to the next Chapter, if not then that's ok too. SMILES ~_^
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: December 03, 2006 03:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that was great. So they went back to that dreaded place, hope Robins former friends aren't there. I don't mind the wait I know you have a life outside of writing Fanficsand I know how busy it can get. I'm just happy when you do update. Oh been meaning to ask would you like my e-mail so that you can get in touch with me for any reason? if yes I'll give it to you in my next review, in no then good thing I asked first. Well Don't care how long it takes you you do great work. Keep it up and look forword to the next chapter. SMILE ^_~
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: November 15, 2006 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Glad you chose to keep going. So who's this twit that Koenma is going to marry or is he? If it's someone Kagome knows that would be soooooooo funny. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. SMILES ^_~
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