| "Warmth in Winter" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Celestial Reign [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2010 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've already read this on fanfic dot net, but had to come here and check it out. :) Love it. Very cute.
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Title: sap me silly
Reviewed By: Yami_Bakura_Itemri [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 19:40 CDT
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Somewhat sappy... and rather OOC in some parts. But I still liked it.. X3 Much enjoyable to read!
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 19:01 CST
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It's taking all the will-power I have not to squeal like a freak. Really, It was very sweet and fluffy (not Too much though, so don't worry). And I'm looking forward to your next M/M (if there is one) almost as much as your next B/R fic. I liked how you portrayed the characters, true they were not how they usually acted, but considering they aren't usually (see 'ever') shown going through anything circumstances that warrants that kind of behavior, it can't really be said that that isn't how they would act. Great job, I look forward to your next fic.
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Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 12:06 CST
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Is there a way to ban individuals from reviewing? If there is, you and I need to think about banning that TJ person... ; ) Ah, another sweet ending to another lovely fic! I really liked Marik's personality in this story. I really liked how Marik, even though he knew (through eavesdropping) how Malik felt about him, continued to stay mum and just sort of strung Malik along for a while. And then, Marik still didn't technically speak the three words that Malik probably wanted to hear but relayed those same emotions in a more dramatic fashion. I liked that Marik honored Malik's request to wait on further intimacy and yet was honest enough to state he had to leave his light's room in order to comply with those wishes. I liked that Malik still felt the need to be close to his dark in order to fall asleep and felt comfortable enough to seek Marik out in spite of his dark's desire for more physicial intimacy. I hate to keep using the word "sweet" but it fits this story! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 22:49 CST
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sglily is a traitor to BxR... *glares* Stop reading and start updating... ;) I'm waiting! Wait... did you say that was end? WHERE'S THE LEMON???? WTF????? LEMON? Please? just one... please? I'll sell you my soul....
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Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 15:25 CST
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Even though Bakura and Ryou are my favorite pairings in YGO, I have room in my heart for these two. Plus, it surely helps that I am now familiar with your writing and would read anything you'd throw at me! Marik seems sort of... anti-social? He seems to be very blunt, runs with his feelings that coincide with what he ultimately wants regardless of what other's might have to say about his actions. My, the length he has gone in order to have Malik seek him out in his own bed. I see you also have another "misunderstanding" going on here! Crossed wires and all... That Marik was that stung by Malik's words ("I hate you!") shows that even though he may be clumsy and/or clueless how to tactfully pursue someone's affections he does have a heart. I liked Isis! She listened carefully and prodded gently until Malik opened up on his own. And, that Marik overheard all of this juicy gossip? Oh, my! Malik is in for quite the surprise, isn't he? Great job!
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 19:06 CST
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Those two certainly are something (what however, I can't say) I wonder how long they've been dancing around each other like this. I say Marik should have made a move on Malik earlier, though it didn't seem to work so well when he Did go after him, so maybe not. I guess considering that Marik Really isn't much of a people person, he did the best he could. Baka. I look forward to seeing how Marik is going to 'straighten out' his omote.
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 18:03 CST
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Ohh... haven't read this one yet... I mormally don't read YGO fic's without Bakura and/or Ryou in them... but hey... there's a first time for everything. The pretending to be asleep was funny... hehehe... you did a good job... I hate normally hate Mariku and Malik because there always OOC in my opinion... like two hyper three years old's... which if you watch the anime, they are nothing like that... eccentric maybe... but not childish and pathetic... (sorry I'm rating again) and you did a VERY good job keeping them in character... I love you! Can't wait to read more.
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Title: Warmth in Winter
Reviewed By: vampslyr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you've done this. Poor Mariku just doesn't know how to interact with people and didn't realize that his Hikari was afraid of loving him. I especially like how you wrote Isis, I think you portrayed her perfectly.
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 22:13 CST
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I like how you write these two! Also many YGO fic writers don't actually watch YGO (if the way they write the characters is anything to go by) so I wouldn't sweat it. The way Y.Marik is portrayed in fanfics is also usually inaccurate so I wouldn't bother worrying about that either. Write the psychos the way you want to. I personally think you're doing a great job at the moment. So please update soon! *lol*
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