| "Anatomy of an Affiar" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: MazSon On: February 01, 2003 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this story rules all! You were really original and fantastic in this one! I mean, the way you set up a affair is how it would be in real life, and the goten and videl thing fit good as well. You are a great writer! I give you the bestest of cuteness stories award! |
Reviewed By: Ryan On: June 28, 2002 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow im just speachless this has got to be the best story i have ever read ...... damn that was the best and i mean THE BEST story i have ever read and u better make a sequal.....wow |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2002 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow what an update! This is super material...I loved the agnst. I guess Marron was justified in leaving; she did have point about Gohan thinking it was vaild to have an affair with her if his wife was, but think Gohan's feels ran a bit too deep for Marron. Woderful story, is this the end? Will there be more? I guess I'll have to sit back and see...ja... |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2002 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My jaw is on the floor. This story kicks ass! I am very into mixed pairings in DBZ, and this one was hot! I would have never thought Gohan going for Marron! But when you think of it...and the way you wrote it...it is HOT!! Congrats, you're the fic of the week! Please, UPDATE THIS STORY!!!I will tell others about this story on my web site! HURRY AND UPDATE!! |
