| "Just keep rockin`" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: global_infection
Reviewed By: global_infection [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It is such an original idea! I can't wait to read more and really hope that you update soon! Pretty please!
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Reviewed By: minirowan On: January 28, 2007 14:13 CST
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that was quick. i thought it would take a while longer for them to relize their feelings. it's kinda rished don't you think? well, that's my opinion but the chapter was still good. kinda surprised me when he kissed her though...oh well. update soon plz!
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Title: upcoming chapters
Reviewed By: shadowkat18 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 21:38 CST
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i know, i know that i have left this story a little abandomed but right now i am waiting for some inspiration to go on. i have just finished writting a few one-shots on Witch Hunter Robin, so i promise that all my new ideas will be for this story!!!!
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Reviewed By: minirowan On: January 23, 2007 23:36 CST
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that was sweet! i like the way you make small conflicts like those between the characters. that's one of the reasons why i like this story. if there are no conflicts, there's no plot, and if there's no plot, frankly,the story sucks. but! you don't have worry about that! oh, and update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: minirowan On: January 23, 2007 23:26 CST
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that was sad! i thought dinner was going to go differently. not with him abruptly leaving her like that. although i kinda think she deserved it. she was being to hard on him! well, the chapter was good anyway. keep writing!
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Reviewed By: minirowan On: January 23, 2007 23:12 CST
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that was a little less than i expected, but oh well. their little converstion was more tame too. i half expected the girls to mob him. that would of been hilarious, and now i can't wait for the dinner scene. keep up with your writing!
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Reviewed By: minirowan On: January 23, 2007 22:57 CST
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that last line actually had me laughing! i feel bad for Serena. she seems really angry with him now that he sent that letter. then again, i'm pointing out the obvious. again. great story!
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Reviewed By: minirowan On: January 23, 2007 22:43 CST
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0.0 that was kinda...strange. did he decide that thing last minute? ah, now i think i'm starting to feel like an idiot. but still, what Mina did both surprised me and somehow made sense. i can actually pisture her doing that, i think it's her personality. hey, did she make it to the lobby? i guess i'll find out. keep writing!
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Reviewed By: minirowan On: January 23, 2007 22:26 CST
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wow. you're good at this. but i was always expecting one of the other girls to take Serena's place in a fic like this. honestly, i sort of thought of ther as someone that would be acting like the rest of the girls. but, i like this even better, it gets to show that she can be mature too. and you're story is great!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 22:24 CST
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pleaseeee update soon.....
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 22:24 CST
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pleaseeee update soon.....
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