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Title: Wow *O*
Reviewed By: Kazeli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read the last chap and all i could think for like 2 mins was..... wow just wow what a wonderful ending. it would be interesting to see this have a sequal. i think it would be a challenge to write one though(no idea if you already have one out or not- havent looked yet) the story was awsome. the ending was unexpected had me on the edge of my seat. i enjoyed this story alot. please keep up the great work with your fics.
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Title: chap 2
Reviewed By: Kazeli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nicly done not any spelling errors i noticed. like your work
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Title: chap 1
Reviewed By: Kazeli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
prety good there wer some spelling errors. i was prety captivated by hte first chapter proglue was short um coulda had something about hte quest before the battle or what they wer doing when naraku showed up to start the fight. and mabey.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 17:02 CST
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i love this story
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Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 22:26 CST
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THIS WAS THE MOST AWESOME STORY EVER I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT YOU ARE TOTALLY AWESOME I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS WELL YEA XD you rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Gdemonpet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 14:49 CDT
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Not sure if this is right or not but most of the times i've seen it, the name has been spelled Kuwabara. (I'll give another review about the story when I reach the end, but so far it's good :) )
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH so no sequal I would read it . I loved the story by the way and I hopw you write more stories soon. Why again as Taro growing so fast was it so he would use his power in the last chapter or is the next story about him?
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 16:39 CDT
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Aw, you wrapped everything up so nicely. ^_^ I have to comment on how much I liked you having Hiei torture the one guard to try to find out which room Kagome was in. That was very much in-character. I had kind of figured Taro would play a big part in the end. ^_~ You had me so curious as to why Kagome wouldn't let Botan and Koenma bring her back. For a minute there, I really thought she was planning to be reincarnated. It was really interesting how you had Kurama remember what the different crystals could do and how he used them to get rid of jewels and to bring Kagome back. I almost laughed at Yusuke mentioning Kagome not knowing if her plan would work, -- he's pretty fly-by-the-seat-of-his-pants when it comes to things like that himself. And poor Hiei. She just had to make him cry in front of everyone. Nice of Yusuke to give him a target for his pent-up emotions. Hmmm. I don't think this needs a sequel. There aren't any loose ends, -- you took care of everything. So, I'd say start a new story. ^_^ Thanks for entertaining us!
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Title: Believe In The Unbelievable
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Cliche
Reviewed By: sfkseklldzvnl On: May 17, 2008 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could stand the insanity of this story until this chapter. What you have done is called a MARY SUE! If there is one thing that I can't stand, it's a "perfect" character. She has a billion powers, she's a demon, she can do anything, beat anyone. What's the point of reading this? She's practically invincible and no matter what happens, she never gets seriously injured. Also, a baby born in a week? That not only makes no sense, it also makes here even more invincible. No instead of 9 months of vulnerability, she has a week. I'm insulting and right now, I don't care. Lame.
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Reviewed By: sesshomari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 22:04 CST
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Nice! Can't wait for your next update! And I can't believe that Naraku got his hands on Taro so easily! But hell I know Hiei will get to them in time, I mean its his mate and son. If Taro doesn't tap into his powers then Hiei will kick the mofo's ass all the way to hell. lol! Update soon! ~!*sesshomari*!~
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Reviewed By: little chika On: March 05, 2008 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 19:41 CST
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Yay you made a really great update....I had a feeling as soon as Kagome said that Shippo and Toru where in the same room ALONE that something like him getting kidnapped was going to happen though I was dening the whole time saying I couldn't be right and guess what happen (wait you don't have to wait you all ready know XP) He was kidnapped...but that really does stink....But trully I think I'm going to make another guess I think that Toru is going to use his powers that the others don't know about to get him and he mother out of the mess they are in.....am I right?.....Wait don't tell me I will find out when you update....so ya update soon..X3...Nyuka
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 01:34 CST
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You may not have thought the chapter was very long, but you had so much action and so many major events packed into it that it felt like it was. ^_^ Love all the humorous moments you put in. I was wondering where in the world Hiei would be when Kag was about to give birth. Of course, he made it back just in the nick of time to witness his son's birth. Good thing, too, since Kag was refusing to push. LOL!! It must be nice to have the constitution of a demon, -- she got up and about quickly after giving birth. I winced when Hiei dropped Shippou on her stomach. ^_^ I enjoy reading about Inuyasha's reaction to and interactions with Kagome, Hiei, and now Taro. And did any of them REALLY think they were going to keep Kag from going after her baby? HA! They were fooling themaselves! I giggled when Yusuke drank the breast milk. (Of course, it doesn't taste much like milk, so he was really not paying any attention, was he? ^_^) Hmmm. Why is Kagome eating all the food? I was interested in the way you had Hiei ask her about the baby's nursing and whether or not it affected her. And now Naraku has her in his grasp. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: sesshomari [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 00:31 CST
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Very good story so far! Hiei and Kagomes stories are my favorite! This one in particular is different and really catches my eye! Anyways update soon! ~!*sesshomari*!~
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