| "Believe in the Unbelievable" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 15:45 CDT
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yay hiei is a father yay hiei is a father yay hiei is a father woo hoo go hiei and kagome go hiei and kagome go go go go
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 22:52 CDT
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That was an action-packed chapter! The whole gang's back together now, thanks to Naraku, even though he didn't mean for it to happen. LOL!! Hiei and Kag didn't waste any time and went straight to the mating. A huge capture of the women. Interesting way to bring up a past adventure with the salamander eggs, and having the dragon be the only way to overcome Kagome was a neat way to do it. And she's pregnant! And mad at Naraku! Lots of fun stuff.
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 16:58 CDT
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OOOHH!!!!!!!!! this was really good! nice and long and loved the way you added the crystals to it. I cant wait till kagome free's sango it sounds really interseting but i wonder how she is gonna do it! Kepp up the good work! xD
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Reviewed By: EP On: July 28, 2007 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i love it you SO need to write more!!!
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Reviewed By: Border Hopper of Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ignore the last comment please except for the update part
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Reviewed By: Border Hopper of Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
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this is a really good fanfic. and i cant wait for the story to be updated. so pretty please with a cherry on top, update soon
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Reviewed By: shippofan49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story so far can you please update very soon shippofan49
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 11:07 CDT
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Oh, that was a wonderful chapter!! Chock-full of great Hiei/Kag moments -- just the way I like it!! You had me giggling like a schoolgirl several times. The crystals are interesting, and it wasn't too suprising that Hiei would have the black one, was it? I wonder who has the healing crystal? Poor Kag does seem to be put to sleep a lot, -- but as long as Hiei joins her -- hooray! Loved it when he sat in the windowsill and she used her powers to put him back where he belonged. Ha!! I was just nodding my head at your list of pairings until I got to Yukina/Inuyasha -- whoa! Didn't expect that at all! That's going to be a little weird. Of course, I imagine he's going to be a bit pissed to find Kag with Hiei at first, huh? Too bad! So, Kag knows how to get her friends out from under Naraku's control, huh? This should be interesting. I thought it was a nice, long chapter, and I was really happy to see it! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Stebba_stud On: April 25, 2007 07:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i almost fell out off my chair loughing so hard it relly is funny and it keeps you up nothing boring in any chapter. update soon and is the way to turn them back maby what they did in the past you know for inuyasha it´s sit and sango is miroku groping her, shippo candy or inuyasha hiting him on the head and him going to kagome for comfort and e.t. if it is please let me know i´m courius
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 17:42 CDT
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Please please please update soon. Prety prety pretty please!
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Title: Believe In The Unbelievable
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 19:30 CDT
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Wow, this is an awsome fic and I'm so happy that I found it while I was randomly looking for a crossover! Hiei and Kagome should defently have thier lemon soon! Although I must admit that I kinda would've been happy for Kurama and Kagome as well, not insted... as well... that may seem weird and all but hey, he's super hot! Anyways I have to be going.. Until next time, ~Mari-chan~
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Angelwings22 On: February 13, 2007 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jo I Love it ^^ And I like how you made her a Demon. I hope you keep up the ggod work and update ^^
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 14:51 CST
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cool story! Please update soon!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 01:22 CST
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I LOVE THIS!! normaly i dont much care for fics that Kagome isnt human in.. but this is soooo unique and interesting that i cant stop reading!!! please update.. and add more romance!!!!!! till next time kep up the good work.. ~Ja Ne Mysterious_Tears
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