| ""Damn Hetero" Series" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Saezuru On: March 29, 2009 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have a 40 gallon tank myself, and always had that problem with the tubing the water when emptying it. This usually happens due to the fact that my tank's water filter is crappy and makes the tank looking like the gross moss crap that you witness seeing in the movie "Nemo." You can never believe how fast a 5cm goldfish could pollute their own tank... The moment I read the hose system and Heero was the one attempting to 'emtpy' the tank I had to bust out laughing! Only Duo would take Heero 'innocent' remarks and get his mind in the gutter cus of it! Now, to make this series more interesting. Can you have a situation with Heero insisting that Duo 'bends over' anytime soon? Maybe after Duo's date he ironically gets head lice or something and Heero has to fix his hair. Hope this is helpful... Other than that great to see that your plot bunnies haven't left after so long.
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Title: I hate your face
Reviewed By: Fenikkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 01:06 CDT
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SO I just needed to add my thoughts to this...I had this whole incident play in my (and glaring at me over your computer screen because you know I am writting a review for this right now isn't going to stop me)head as I read this, and was happy to relive the memory of draining our tank. It was a good idea at the time to use the buckets for the fish... Good on paper, not so much in practice. Oh I can't wait for the next installment...(and it should scare you I have typed so much)...What innocent banter will we twist and pervert next? Stay tuned...
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Reviewed By: Mitsukai2010 On: December 29, 2006 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved, this!! It was amazingly funny!!! Well done!
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Reviewed By: heechanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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cute i love it. very funny 2. please continue with more
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: JW-chan On: December 17, 2006 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god i love this keep going. I loved the series Yellow and i love Heero and Duo so great combination!! ^_^ Yeah anywayz keep writing and can't wait for another chapter
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 11:34 CST
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LMAO this is priceless. keep going!!!
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Title: Cute
Reviewed By: Random reader On: November 25, 2006 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic, its interesting, though it s a little short, you should keep writing, I'd love to see where it goes.
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Reviewed By: Niere [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 17:48 CST
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I'd think that Duo would be a bit better at putting tab A into slot "C" rather than "B", ne? This is cute. Keep it up.
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