| "Discovery" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Danaoula hime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 10:25 CST
Comment/Review:
OH. . . I forgot the scene with the elders teaching him adout sex must have been a really great LOL!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Danaoula hime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol lol lol. . . it is realy funny, but I have a question the light from the card is the dream card that conects her dreams whith his or what? I really have that query so if you have the time answer me at some time! VERY NICE STORY!!!!
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