| "Breathless" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 03:03 CDT
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oks... i was still on when my yahoo e-mail popped up and said you had updated.. it was great as usual.. but as to you remarks of changing it and making the rest of this (hopefully) long story into two different parts... i dont think you should!! while i respect that you write it.. it might confuse people and make it hard to find the other half for people that are un-experienced on this site... its a great story and you should just let it flow... does any of this make sense??? i hope so.. i know i review alot.. but as an author myself i know that just even knowing one person cares and likes what you work so hard for makes everything worth it!! so as your number 1 fan ( and i can say this... look at my reviews!) i dont think you should turn this into a two part story.. until later perrhaps when you are satisfied with the end to this.. just make it one really goooood long story.. and you will at least make me happy.. but again.. this is your story... and make yourself happy!! ^____^ i hope i help even a little.. till next time.. and if you need anymore help.. just ask ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Title: yays
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 01:26 CDT
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IVE MISSED SOOOOO MANY UPDATES during my move.. o well... cheers!!! awww is this going to be a Serena/Sesshy story?? I HOPE SOOOOO... but its getting good.. plz update soon Ja Ne ~Mysterious_Tears~
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 12:58 CST
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AHHHHH hurry up and save Kanna!! save her!!! yays... full of angst!!! update soon ^___^
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Title: woohoo
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 05:34 CST
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wow.. she remembered??? how is she going to handle it all?? i cant wait.. but i would really love to see Usagi with Sess soon!!! i mean they can even be fighting!! lol.. so i was wondering.. did you make up all those scenes she was recalling or did you take them from the episode of Sailor Moon where they destroy Queen Barryl (thats not how you spell her name i know.. i suck at spelling) and she gets Darien back??? just wonder.. but ne ways keep up the great work!!! cant wait to read more.. your numba 1 fan!! wooooo :) ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Reviewed By: Kayla-chan On: February 23, 2007 21:50 CST
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Loving it so far, but I'm dissapointed Usa isn't with either Naraku or Sesshomaru right now. Whens there going to be hentai? I know, I'm sorry, I'm a pervert :P I love the story without it, but I'm looking forward to that part :P
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 22:46 CST
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hmmmm a bit of forshadowing perhaps??? lol.. keeps up the good work.. cant wait to read more :) ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 19:58 CST
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I HAVE NO CLUE WHO IT WAS!! i really dont... so you should hurry up and update and tell me!!! tell me!!! lol.. its getting good.. and i wonder what drama will go down when the Inu gang and Sessy find out that shes in THEIR village.. lol.. o well... till enxt time ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Title: awwww
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 14:45 CST
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that was sooooo sweet!!!!! i got so sad when Rin died.. but you promised to make it better and you did!!! yays... so Kudo's to you!!!! whats going on with Usagi??? awww i can just picture Rins face when she gets to see Usagi again... how cute!!! it will happen.. lol.. ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 23:22 CST
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thank you for updating again!!!!! i know ive like reviewed your story like2 times already.. but i just feel liek you deserve a new one for every update.... so you update.. and i review... sound good ne?? well Kudo's to you.. ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 23:22 CST
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thank you for updating again!!!!! i know ive like reviewed your story like2 times already.. but i just feel liek you deserve a new one for every update.... so you update.. and i review... sound good ne?? well Kudo's to you.. ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Title: OOOOh
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 18:01 CST
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I loved it!!!! and we got to see more of Usagi!!! woohooo... she was always my fav.. so i cant wait to see what more trouble she is gonna get herself into... and who will be her first kiss??? and shes already started to affect Sessy, but he wont show it! nope... and thats why hes soooo hot!! XD keep up the good work.. ~Ja Ne Mysterious_Tears
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Title: yays!!
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 04:01 CST
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ooo i really like this... its a great fic with a very cool idea that ive never even thought of and i have written a few inu/SM fanfics.. lol.. but parts of your story get a bit confusing... when you switch from one persons point of view... or a flashback.. you need to show that... with like a line of ~*~*~* or somthing.... and please.. please.. put more Usagi in there.. wether its with Sess or Nar-Nar.. lol .. but keep up the good work!! Kudos to you :) Ja Ne ~ Mysterious_Tears
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Reviewed By: cvv On: February 03, 2007 00:29 CST
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keep on updating
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Reviewed By: chime On: December 26, 2006 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow I really like your fic, it's refreshing. I've never seen this plot before hehe, I hope you continue=)
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Title: INCREDIBLE!
Reviewed By: Yasha's Girl On: December 09, 2006 19:14 CST
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Wow I've NEVER seen a story quite like this before please CONTINUE!
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