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Reviewed By: erika cosmos On: September 07, 2007 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story but its too long and monotonous(sp?).
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 10:35 CDT
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Very good chapter... im sure you put alot of work into it.. i cant wait to see what happens next.. please update soon!!! ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_tears
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 22:17 CDT
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i missed 3!!! 3... yays!! it was amazing.. great read!! i love how you write it all... you get your point across expertly without over doing anything... thats a true talent... and i cant wait to see what Usagi thinks when she meets with Naraku.. and what Sessy will do?!?!? KEEP IT UP!! ~Mysterious_Tears~
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 22:39 CDT
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it was very good as usual.. but i think that the group neeeds a little more interaction with eachother... they are all so silent!!!! but thats prob how it would really go down.. and Usagi is right on the verge of find out that Naraku is Niriya!! woohooo ... i wonder what she will think when she finds this out?? o well and yes you did answer some questions.. but you also made many more!!! evil... lol.. keep up the good work and update soon!! ;) ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious Tears
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 02:48 CDT
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this chapter was a bit confusing at first witht he way it started out.. but once you read it a bit more it all became clear.. so it was a good read!! it kept me guessing.. lol.. ne ways.. Rin is soooo cute! ive always loved her.. and it was always cute when she ahd someone as a mother.. or someone that treated her sweetly like a daughter... will Usagi be her new mama? mmmm *hopes so* till next time .. keep up the good work~ Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 01:00 CDT
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woohooo... great chapter as always!! but its true.. the more you right.. the longer each chapter takes, the more effort you have to put into it, but also the more rewarding it gets when you finaly see it writen down on here and posted.. agree? so keep it up :) ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 08:53 CDT
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it was a much deeper chapter then alot of the rest!! but im assuming that was what you were aiming for? but over all it was a great read.. the drama and angst were great!!! and you just made Sess jump off tha page at you.. because thats really how i think he would act to all of her "human emotions" because they are weak and pathetic.. or so he thinks? its great keep up the goo work :) ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 03:03 CDT
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oks... i was still on when my yahoo e-mail popped up and said you had updated.. it was great as usual.. but as to you remarks of changing it and making the rest of this (hopefully) long story into two different parts... i dont think you should!! while i respect that you write it.. it might confuse people and make it hard to find the other half for people that are un-experienced on this site... its a great story and you should just let it flow... does any of this make sense??? i hope so.. i know i review alot.. but as an author myself i know that just even knowing one person cares and likes what you work so hard for makes everything worth it!! so as your number 1 fan ( and i can say this... look at my reviews!) i dont think you should turn this into a two part story.. until later perrhaps when you are satisfied with the end to this.. just make it one really goooood long story.. and you will at least make me happy.. but again.. this is your story... and make yourself happy!! ^____^ i hope i help even a little.. till next time.. and if you need anymore help.. just ask ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Title: yays
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 01:26 CDT
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IVE MISSED SOOOOO MANY UPDATES during my move.. o well... cheers!!! awww is this going to be a Serena/Sesshy story?? I HOPE SOOOOO... but its getting good.. plz update soon Ja Ne ~Mysterious_Tears~
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 12:58 CST
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AHHHHH hurry up and save Kanna!! save her!!! yays... full of angst!!! update soon ^___^
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Title: woohoo
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 05:34 CST
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wow.. she remembered??? how is she going to handle it all?? i cant wait.. but i would really love to see Usagi with Sess soon!!! i mean they can even be fighting!! lol.. so i was wondering.. did you make up all those scenes she was recalling or did you take them from the episode of Sailor Moon where they destroy Queen Barryl (thats not how you spell her name i know.. i suck at spelling) and she gets Darien back??? just wonder.. but ne ways keep up the great work!!! cant wait to read more.. your numba 1 fan!! wooooo :) ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Reviewed By: Kayla-chan On: February 23, 2007 21:50 CST
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Loving it so far, but I'm dissapointed Usa isn't with either Naraku or Sesshomaru right now. Whens there going to be hentai? I know, I'm sorry, I'm a pervert :P I love the story without it, but I'm looking forward to that part :P
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 22:46 CST
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hmmmm a bit of forshadowing perhaps??? lol.. keeps up the good work.. cant wait to read more :) ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 19:58 CST
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I HAVE NO CLUE WHO IT WAS!! i really dont... so you should hurry up and update and tell me!!! tell me!!! lol.. its getting good.. and i wonder what drama will go down when the Inu gang and Sessy find out that shes in THEIR village.. lol.. o well... till enxt time ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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Title: awwww
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 14:45 CST
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that was sooooo sweet!!!!! i got so sad when Rin died.. but you promised to make it better and you did!!! yays... so Kudo's to you!!!! whats going on with Usagi??? awww i can just picture Rins face when she gets to see Usagi again... how cute!!! it will happen.. lol.. ~Ja Ne~ Mysterious_Tears
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