| "Return To Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: bb On: September 03, 2007 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I didnt review.I've been busy. I knew Aria and Seto had sex during that vision.Alright so Seto knows.I wonder how Aria will find out?And how the others will react to the news. I cant wait(: Also it was good that Ryo and Marik finally get to see Miracle. Well until next chap.Bye.
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Reviewed By: Mahina On: July 02, 2007 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I've just read all your fanfics.All I have to say is awesome! I have to say that Aria is my favorite character.She has been since the day she was born. I love that she's all perverted and shit especially around her dad.Sounds like my best friend Connie.Her kids ,Kai and Rhett sound adorable.I wish that all her kids could have survived though.I would liked to have seen a chibi Aria.But maybe Aria will have a baby in this story.By the looks of it yes.Since she did the naughty with Umi and probably Seto during that vision of theirs.I would love to see her have a girl. If possible with both Umi and Seto.I love chibi's. So it wouldnt bother me to see two more babies in the story.Could ya think of that possibly happening please?Thanks.
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Reviewed By: bb On: June 28, 2007 17:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww I thought Aria and Seto were gonna do the nasty.They probably did during that vision of theirs.Oh well.Anyway loved the lemon between Aria and Umi. Havent seen one of those in a long time.Thats all I have to say for now.Until the next chap.Bye!
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Title: N/A
Reviewed By: bb On: May 18, 2007 21:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh so its Kai showing the powers. I thought it was Rhett since it was his stuff disappearing. Aria grossing out Baku was pretty funny. Speaking of Aria, I never expected her and Seto to be as my sister calls it 'making sweet music' together so soon.I love it! Also I have a few questions again. I will reply to the email you sent me and you can answer them hopefully soon but since your so busy and all I will understand if it takes awhile. Good chappie,cant wait for the next for some AriaxSeto lemony goodness^^
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Reviewed By: Aislynn Goldleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 14:46 EDT
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While I don't think Umi would hurt Aria, Seto is SO gonna be in some pain once Umi gets ahold of him! I don't think there will be much left of Seto for Joey to get ahold of either. I think Kai is actually the one with the powers showing, since he asked "oh, Is that where it went?" I'm surprised Aria didn't catch that. That little sentance had even MY parental radar up! Aria grossing out Bakura had me chuckling too. Well, my kids are fighting - again - This series makes me VERY glad they don't have shadow powers! Thank you for the update & I'm looking forward to the next one!
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Title: N/A
Reviewed By: bb On: May 09, 2007 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved how Aria and Umi were getting it on. To bad they couldnt have finished. Anyway it seems Rhett is showing signs of shadow magic. Thats awesome! But what about Kai? when will we see him using powers? Also why havent you replied to my email. All I wanted was a few questions answered. So once again I'll give you my email. Its nightofsorrow@yahoo.com Please reply!!!
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Reviewed By: AislynnG. (bein lazy) On: April 11, 2007 12:50 EDT
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I bet the baby is Rhonda's! She's so messed up, I thought of her immediately! I wonder if this will give Aten another reason to hold on just a little longer, though I hate seeing him suffer. ((((Hugs to Robbie)))) OH! I hope the baby's not another one of Yami-Yuugi's traps!
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Reviewed By: CC On: February 16, 2007 16:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My friend who you know as 'Aria-Kanika' told me you plan on making Rhett's hair curly.That odd; I mean Aria and as far as I know Umi doesnt have curly hair, why Rhett? You should also make his head covered with white spiky locks or with blue streaks.Thats just my opinion, its your choice what to do. And I wanted to tell you I love your stories^_^
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Reviewed By: Baku'sgirl On: February 04, 2007 00:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been wondering,what does Rhett look like? And like one reviewer asked will Aria's chibis have shadow powers? please tell me! My email is aria-kanika@hotmail.com Lastly great lemon^_^
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Title: I'm so sorry for not reviewing...
Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (NLI) On: January 29, 2007 01:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I miss your story so much! I shall try to summarize my review for all those ch I missed. This is still as intriguing as I remembered it to be if not more. ^^ And of course the humor and innuendos are still some of the best out there. Aria and Umi's fishing pole, XD gods I cracked up! Can't forget Mariku's insaneness, him and Aria teaming up against Bakura, gotta love that. And yay for that lemon between Mariku and Malik, absolutely smexy and lovely! *Cheshire grin* Blood-lusted as usual. The drama is as good as always, and man those annoying crowds outside of their home must burn! (as Asher would say, lol) Stupid reporters, how can they believe something that unnatural. Damn that bastard Yami!!! *glares evil daggers* It's all his fault! Ooh I need a voodoo doll of him, mwahahaha! Anyways, I'm glad Bakura thought of recharging their items, hopefully it works. And poor Aten, he seems to be in pretty bad shape, hope he'll be alright for the time being. *huggles* And chibis, so cute! ^^ *glomps* Hope Jou will be ok too. You know, I never really thought about this before or maybe I just forgot, but was Kaiba's family always living in Kaiba Corp? Hmm, I guess they were because I remember in the last story they were held hostage there, if I recall. Heh and of course those passwords can't be forgotten, bunnies. *giggles* I'm giddy, this is such a superb story and even with the imminent dangers, it doesn't seem to be as depressing as the previous story I think. I hope I covered everything, your ch are long again, yay! ^_^ Well, I hope you keep writing and keep up the amazing work. I really apologize for not reading/reviewing for over 2 months! Such is life. as my friend says. I hope to keep reading and reviewing, and hopefully next time I'll be on time. See ya next time. ^_~
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Title: wondering
Reviewed By: bs On: January 26, 2007 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked how Aria grossed out her dad by talking about Umi's pole*snickers* you come up with the most perverted and funny shit! Also do Kai and Rhett actually have a purpose in this story or are they here to look cute? And will at least Kai show signs of having shadow powers;i think that would be cool and a good idea if you havent allready thought about it.Anyway good story^^
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Title: Yeah MURDER
Reviewed By: Yamidiot [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 19:41 EST
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i am happy to have reread your complete stories, and i LOVE this one so far
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 17:08 EST
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GAHHHHHHHH!!!! Wonderful start, Im so glad to be caught up and I want to shoot that crzy guy. *pouts* But then again lets get onto something more cute like.....CHIBI'S!!!!! *CUDDLES KAI AND RHETT!* I love you!
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl (NLI) On: November 19, 2006 04:22 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you start the ch w/ a humorous note. XD Just lovely, chibi Kai scaring them, XD So innocent, cute lil chibi. *huggles* And of course, Fluffy Bunny, XD. Gotta love that and the lime! ^^ It's too bad the ch ends w/ such an evil note, stupid stupid Yami. Anyways, can't wail til the next ch. Til then. ^_~
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Reviewed By: e.t.c. On: November 17, 2006 19:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE SEQUEL IS BACK!! I look forward to reading it!!!!!!!!
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